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Re: My First Piece..

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Seras wrote: GG isn't that bad most the time.

Don't let these people stop you or get you down =)
I thought I was bad all the time :( I wanna be badass!

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Don't make me start the GG warning system! :D
Now that I've settled down a bit, got knowledge of the land and have a routine set up I can finally get back to doing what I wanna do most... Can someone tell me what that is?
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Warning !
:) I love my warning system
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I disagree with most of the criticism as it's only based on other styles.

I do believe that you have a lot of room to improve, however I can see a lot of raw talent just wasting to bust out. If you saw the first drawings I did of DBZ a few years back and see what I can do now, you'll see how far you can go and I'm not even that devoted. Point is everyone has to start somewhere, so do not let those idiots(yes I'm calling you as you're acting) discourage you.


As for the proportions, look at Disney characters, their proportions are all screwed up, so unless you're going for a realistic style, which I'm not sure what you're trying to do, then disregard what everyone has to say.

Some people say taking anatomy classes help with art skills, but not having taken them myself, I wouldn't know.
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Seras wrote: Demyx and Chesire Cat are just little flunky followers to Aiden.
I do not fallow Aiden. I just type whats on my mind ^^ I am sure she can get better if she REALLY tried.
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follow.
Yeah, you were right about me, but can I get myself out from underneath this guilt that will crush me? in the choir, I saw our sad Messiah he was bored and tired of my laments
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Pennyroyal Tea wrote: I disagree with most of the criticism as it's only based on other styles.
My comment wasn't based on styles.


Hey you guys? I don't think she's coming back.
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Cheshire Cat wrote:
Seras wrote: Demyx and Chesire Cat are just little flunky followers to Aiden.
I do not fallow Aiden. I just type whats on my mind ^^ I am sure she can get better if she REALLY tried.
You say that now after I've called you a flunky. But before you only dissed her on her work.

Most likely she ain't coming back GG. Hey I wouldn't either if I was a noob. I don't blame people leaving because it's users like you guys that are making them leave. You can't complain about people leaving and this place going down the drain when your causing it. This place is like a community. The community is effected by the action of the people. But no one gives a dang no more. Let's stop spamming this thread unless it has to do with comment about the peice she put up.
Now that I've settled down a bit, got knowledge of the land and have a routine set up I can finally get back to doing what I wanna do most... Can someone tell me what that is?
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Seras wrote:And Demyx and Chesire Cat are just little flunky followers to Aiden. Don't let these people stop you or get you down =)
Are you freaking kidding me? Seras, seriously, I thought you were better than that. They aren't flunky followers, they aren't sheep, if anything they are the complete opposite. I am the follower to them if you couldn't tell that, being I posted after them. tsk tsk.
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I really don't care. Your group is like a bunch of blind men in a labyrinth. It doesn't matter who's leading.
Yeah, you were right about me, but can I get myself out from underneath this guilt that will crush me? in the choir, I saw our sad Messiah he was bored and tired of my laments
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SPAMMING! Warning for Aiden and Pennyroyal Tea. 2 more warnings and yeah, I'll figure out a punishment.

I am dead serious. Anyone else who posts that doesn't refer to the drawing in which this topic will get a warning.

I wish she'd come back though. See what else she's capable of :( *le sigh*
Now that I've settled down a bit, got knowledge of the land and have a routine set up I can finally get back to doing what I wanna do most... Can someone tell me what that is?
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Oh man, this has taken a bad turning. :/

Well the first post what Tea posted was interesting and it made me come put this post.

I think Neko just needs to practice, because when I started off drawing people would not stop laughing at me, then two years later almost everyone I showed my drawing to are like ‘wow’. But I’ve have had the odd ‘Oh that’s ****’ or ‘Tch, you’ve traced that!’ But that comes from jealousy or maybe they are just nasty and they are twice as good as me. :/


Neko has left hasn't she? (The grammar seems all wrong to me in that post i made. ¬_¬;)
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Aiden wrote:That, wasn't ignorant, that was the cold hardcore truth.

Telling people nicely how great their drawings are, when really they're poor as [censored], doesn't make them better.

It's like when someone is [censored] up mentally in the brain, making them feel comfortable and like the real world is a fluffy paradise doesn't prepare them for the tough [censored] that the real world really is.
Ha... Ha... Ha.. The cold hardcore truth about yew, lets see. You're a tub of lard who needs a life off of AA. Thanks.

By the way, to the author. These pics weren't bad
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Nelly wrote:
Aiden wrote:That, wasn't ignorant, that was the cold hardcore truth.

Telling people nicely how great their drawings are, when really they're poor as [censored], doesn't make them better.

It's like when someone is [censored] up mentally in the brain, making them feel comfortable and like the real world is a fluffy paradise doesn't prepare them for the tough [censored] that the real world really is.
Ha... Ha... Ha.. The cold hardcore truth about yew, lets see. You're a tub of lard who needs a life off of AA. Thanks.

By the way, to the author. These pics weren't bad
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The Evil Russell Crowe wrote:
Nelly wrote:
Aiden wrote:That, wasn't ignorant, that was the cold hardcore truth.

Telling people nicely how great their drawings are, when really they're poor as [censored], doesn't make them better.

It's like when someone is [censored] up mentally in the brain, making them feel comfortable and like the real world is a fluffy paradise doesn't prepare them for the tough [censored] that the real world really is.
Ha... Ha... Ha.. The cold hardcore truth about yew, lets see. You're a tub of lard who needs a life off of AA. Thanks.

By the way, to the author. These pics weren't bad
Hey Sam, you're cool by me now.
Uhh thanks? :freddy:
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oh how modest XD
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