Museum of Mai's work

[Mai]

here ima post all my fancy-shmancy work.


I'm out there risking my soul.
Why am I the one who's got to pay this toll?
This is your problem, not just mine.
But if I don't fight then I have to pay a fine.

Destroying everyone's families
Making us seem like wre the cause of all these casualties.

Your making this a win only situation.
How come now that I kill i'm not put on probation?
This is because Bush is in the Government.
And you know what, bush is loving it.

He's sitting in his office, loving that the war is so long.
It's spreading throught the world and he think's there's nothing wrong.

This is all causing loss of life.
How is shooting the enemy better than stabbing someone with a knife?

You think this is all over governmental reasons.
It's got to do with our economy.
And you wonder why there is so much treason.

He's trying to aviod all the issues.
Got a problem bush? Here's a [censored] tissue.

>Mai<

[≈ Kªrdis Ω]

Good Job *claps* I luv it!!!!

[blackrose_r7]

Yeah. I liked it.

And its true. Bush only sits on his chair and relax while millions of people are dieing and auffering thanks to him.

[immortal angel]

bush is a %^%&^&*^$*($%(**(%^^%#$!#%*(^. i hate him! great poem!

[Mai]

When he was first being elected (first time round) i was unsure..but now i just hate him.

and sorry for my profanity, it was the only way i tohught i could get the message out.

[blackrose_r7]

Its ok.

[Yami Haga-Ryuzaki]

One word-
Supercalafanstasicalisticamagnifico!
I don't like Bush either, he's a @#!%&#!
Even people in Australia hate him

[Pyro Psycho]

im anti-bush all the way sista!!!

[Pocky Chick]

*Holds up as many 10s as she can*

You know... Bush made it better for homo's ^^ We all can get marryed in Europ. ^^ *thinks of having a wedding at the Eifel Tower* *sigh* how romantic... I loved your poem

[Mai]

thank ya verwy much.


I would love to get married at thepope's house..why? just because he cant get married and have kids ima rub it in.

[noodles87]

Yeah. I liked it.

And its true. Bush only sits on his chair and relax while millions of people are dieing and auffering thanks to him.

1. Bush does not sit in his chair all day.
2. Millions are not dieing everyday. Tens okay i'll take that, but that's war.
3. War was not about oil, but about the potential increase in terrorism networks in the U.S. Take the fight to them.
4. You can't just make him the scapegoat for all the things happening in the world.
5. Still a good poem, love ya Mai.

[Baka-Tenshi]

Hmm, yes I am against Bush, I just don't like all the bull he's done; loved your poem Mai. Ryhme scheme and flow of the poem were great, and the messaging in it was very strong, good job. ^_^

[Mai]

Treating us like he cares
Making this war we are fighting the only rage we share
Putting our next generation on the line
What does he expect, us to make him a shrine?
Putting the weight of the world on our shoulders
exectin citizens to act like solders
Packing us with bombs and guns
teaching minors how to do hit and runs
giving us orders like we're his slaves
premaking and filling everyone's graves
holding the american "honor"
some day, when i die ill be his donor
Id [censored] up my organs just for him
cares cares if that is considered a sin
Im giving back what he got us into
trying to make this war as bad as the flu
when the day comes for us to rise
I'll show him how far he'll get with all these [censored] lies.

>Mai<


(i know the language is bad, im upset and the time called for it..sorry)

[Darker Angel]

Excellent. well said i love the poem Mai u always write good poems

[Mai]

Thanks a bunch. as you cn tell i dot like bush.

[Darker Angel]

yup. and i dont like Bush either..i would have peffered another president ..like Kerry i guess.
i dont' like the way Bush talks , or the war he has Begun and i feel like he lies sometimes...-well thats just my opoin and well Mai ur poem totally defines that U dont like Bush with strong emotions!and thats gewd !