my poems....by the god of death

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my poems....by the god of death

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hello all im sure some of you remeber who i am.. ive been in a slump as of late and well came back here to talk to freinds. anyhow heres a poem. feel free to pm me any time

tormented and torn... lost to the ways of cruelity and harshness
i tried to battle on for so long but now i have nothing left to give
torn between life and death, sorrow and happiness
torn between what could have been and what should have been
the darkness now consumes me... the soul and heart are forgotten
the fire that once burned in me is nothing but ash and soot now
ive beared so much pain in the past years but nothing could protect me,
nothing could stop this blow that hit me, nothing could have kept me the same.
im no longer a person with a soul... im no longer a person with a heart....
im just shell... left behind and disguarded....
a rotting corpse with nothing left to lose...but in one way everything to gain....
currently all emergency staff is unavaible... we are sending over someone to easy the suffering.

http://s13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php

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=D> =D> =D> =D> Amazing!

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hmmm sad that only one responsed.. but thats ok thank you for your comment.
currently all emergency staff is unavaible... we are sending over someone to easy the suffering.

http://s13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php

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What my one response isn't important.

Just wait more people will respond soon. So be happy

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GOD! =D! (tis biki 8)) i love it. its so sad i almost wanna cry. feel free to Pm me if u wanna talk. all my love,
~Biki 8)
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twitchs* its a good thing ive come out of my slump a bit or that would have really disturbed me
currently all emergency staff is unavaible... we are sending over someone to easy the suffering.

http://s13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php

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O.k

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Thats really good,death!And sad at the same time.

But I really like it.
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god of death wrote:twitchs* its a good thing ive come out of my slump a bit or that would have really disturbed me
............r u saying u rnt happy to hear from me? ;.; fine then god. ;.;
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No he hates you j/k

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Deep meaning...good job.
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Thats good GoD it's also the same poem i have seen on the DD.

Good work =D>
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thank you all... my poems are shared through a kind network if a get enough response to it i end up sending it to the other sites i belong to.
currently all emergency staff is unavaible... we are sending over someone to easy the suffering.

http://s13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php

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Cool

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Not bad for a rookie.
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rookie? is that because i didnt correct the spelling, grammer and punctatation?
did you ever think that maybe thats my style? my way of writing?
currently all emergency staff is unavaible... we are sending over someone to easy the suffering.

http://s13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php

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