A womans' touch

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The Realist
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A womans' touch

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By: Me
Date: 11/29/07

Everyday I feel the touch of a woman.
A feeling of warmth and gentleness.
The tips of a pure womans' fingers,
Sends waves through me of pure kindness.
Like the feeling of getting a smile,
Glad that it is only for you.
With my reaction of being happy,
And gladly smile back, Thank you.
The soft palm creates a transcending feeling,
A feeling that cleanses my soul.
Enough force and power within a touch,
Can make my heart become whole.
It erases the heart-aches and pain,
The sorrow, loneliness, and hatred.
And replaces them with love and care,
Making sure I will no longer dread.
But the feeling of a hug from one,
Carries the love within me.
A warmth of thy embrance of another,
Stunned for the great feeling for me.
My face starts to flood tears.
The darkness within gets crushed.
I'm complete, pure but helpless,
To the touch of a womans' trust.
Anime is a way of life. But so is Reality and it hits harder.

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Re: A womans' touch

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:D Awesome!

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Re: A womans' touch

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Thank you! I had plenty of people review it and tel me what they thought. Anyone else?
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Re: A womans' touch

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It's awesome!!!I luv it 100% \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ :mrgreen: :mrgreen: =D> =D> =D>
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Re: A womans' touch

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very nice! 10/10
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Re: A womans' touch

Post by Hey »

i'll be honest.
it reminded me of sexually abusive mothers. i had a normal childhood thank you very much.

but yeah, hey, good job.

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it was very sweet. i love it realist. :)
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