Here are some of my poems!

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Gaming Goddess
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Re: Here are some of my poems!

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shioricallisto wrote:Yea maybe considering somebody just called me stupid. How would you feel if somebody called you stupid?
Mm, question marks imply questions.

To answer, I'd ignore it. And not post fairly bad poetry. I agree with what Scorp said, there's no flow what so ever.
An ordinary girl, an ordinary waist; but ordinary's just not good enough today.
Who needs imagination when you have a television?
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Re: Here are some of my poems!

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i thought you might think about that. I also agree with Scorp after i read them again. I didn't see any flow either. I'll work more on that.
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