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tell me if this poem is good please

Post by therealhokagequeen »

if i had to choose between the sun or you
i'd choose you;you are my light.

if i had to choose between my heart and soul
or you, i'd choose you.
you have both.

i'd toss the world upside down
if it would make you happy
cuz you happiness is mine too.

what i'm trying to say is that...
.....well....
you're smart fill in the blank.
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Post by Saugen auf das pferd »

Brilliant
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Saugen auf das pferd wrote:Brilliant
LOL.
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It's ok. I can understand it which is good 8)
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Post by therealhokagequeen »

:D thnx!!!! :love:
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its better than scorpionwarriors :)
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That hurt :( XD
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scorpionwarrior wrote:That hurt :( XD
sorry
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