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Any help on this drawing?

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I have a tendency to draw with alot of detail and not notice something is off until the very end. Do you see anything wrong with her before I draw her clothes?

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Why not just keep her like that? She has a very nice cave-lady feel.
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The arm meeting the shoulder is a bit too small.

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lol cave lady xp so mean!
she is going to be decked out in 1920's!

and I think I understand about the arm >.<
I see something going on with the thumb too O.o... lol..
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I likes ittttt! =]

Maybe smooth out the ends of her hair and make her neck a bit slimmer..it looks like she's hunched over.

Other than that, it's great! :wink:
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I mean it in a good way! T.T
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