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Any help on this drawing?

Posted: May 23, 2010 7:59pm
by Snowy
I have a tendency to draw with alot of detail and not notice something is off until the very end. Do you see anything wrong with her before I draw her clothes?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/ ... copy-1.jpg

Re: Any help on this drawing?

Posted: May 23, 2010 9:30pm
by Tailtiu
Why not just keep her like that? She has a very nice cave-lady feel.

Re: Any help on this drawing?

Posted: May 23, 2010 9:41pm
by Gaming Goddess
The arm meeting the shoulder is a bit too small.

Awesome value work, especially in the hair! Well done!

Re: Any help on this drawing?

Posted: May 24, 2010 4:47pm
by Snowy
lol cave lady xp so mean!
she is going to be decked out in 1920's!

and I think I understand about the arm >.<
I see something going on with the thumb too O.o... lol..

Re: Any help on this drawing?

Posted: May 25, 2010 5:24pm
by Jade_Steel_Hawk
I likes ittttt! =]

Maybe smooth out the ends of her hair and make her neck a bit slimmer..it looks like she's hunched over.

Other than that, it's great! :wink:

Re: Any help on this drawing?

Posted: May 26, 2010 9:13pm
by Tailtiu
I mean it in a good way! T.T