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A friend of mine gave me inspiration for this poem. Turns out both of us are in the same boat.

Hearts are broken.
The tears unspoken.
Sorrow stirs inside,
suddenly there's no upside.
'Tis a very hard thing,
to mend a broken heart.
If only the world could just restart,
maybe then the hearts could keep apart.
Alas, even if a man could move time and space;
He would eventually have to face
the reality that is life.
Though despite the strife,
time will make hard,
the heart shall take guard.
Some still say, "Oh, there's plenty of fish"
in what must now be a petri dish.
Oh my dear friend, do not despair,
instead rebuild your castle-in-the-air.
Seek once again, both far and near,
and maybe have a beer!
But, never doubt,
and bail out.
For you see,
for love, you will just have to wait and see.

thanks Athos

MARS4 wrote:dude, i love that D:
great job!! how long did it take you to write it?

Like an hour. The hardest thing was trying to start it. I went through half a dozen different ideas, then once I decided to stick with this one, the rest some-what just came to me. For this being my second poem I've ever written, this is my longest.

Athos is a poet and i didnt know it D:

SASSZAIN wrote:Athos is a poet and i didnt know it D:

I write poetry secretly. But if you like that, I'll post more when I write more.

I think you should

I agree with Sass

SASSZAIN wrote:Athos is a poet and i didnt know it D:

^What he said
FFFFFFFFFF how did I miss this in all my loitering of AA? You have skills wriiite moooore