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Holy fudge! Those were very beautiful Dark Mage Of Destiny, and you wrote them just for me?? Gosh , I don't know what to say! Thanks sweetcakes!
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Hey, you earned themΛппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:Holy fudge! Those were very beautiful Dark Mage Of Destiny, and you wrote them just for me?? Gosh , I don't know what to say! Thanks sweetcakes!
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Beautiful peom Anner, wonderful. And, it's ok to make poems that are made up, but poems that are real, filled with true emotions, always turn out better then others. But it's still a beautiful poem Anner, great job. ^_^Λппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:The Untold
I have never seen you cry my love,
Have you any emotions left?
The other day a silver dove,
Came to me and conveyed a theft.
Who was this thief, my sweet solitude?
I asked as my tongue went numb.
Your heart, my soul, our gratitude.
I tried to speak, but I was dumb.
My greatest sanctuary widened her wings,
I held back bitter-sweet painful tears.
As she flew away she whispered, sing
But I did not allow my head to hear.
And she was gone, and I alone,
My heart broken, I felt the burn.
Yet…I did not miss her radiant tone.
And my feelings had never been so stern.
And now the tears you’ve held for so long,
Rush down like a waterfall, just on…and on…
Hush now my beloved, let me sing you a song.
Don’t let the world, block out your sun.
P.S. I wrote this today, just for you Dark Mage Of Destiny lol. But I wasn't feeling anything when I wrote it, and it makes me angry. I hate expressing myself through some form of art, when there's nothing to express, because it means that I'm just making it up. I guess that's what I did today, I made everything up, including the emotions in the poem. I hate that, but oh well....
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Ahahahahahaha, oh frick, that was hilarious! I nearly fell out my chair when I read it! Awesome!Λппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:Lol, I had SO much fun writing this poem today! I wrote it during my break at work...hahahaha, then I read it for a co-worker, he told me he always knew I was crazy, and then asked if I have a rat. lol.
-The rat, the cat, the bat, the mat, and my wonderful big black hat!-
Oh my god! What was that?!
I don’t know, but it was fat!
I think I just saw a rat,
Chase away my stupid cat!
Was it fat?
What? My hat?
No the rat!!
Oh, yes it was, now bring that bat!
...all I did was give it a pat...
Give what a pat!
The rat a pat! Now where’s your bat!?
That’s disgusting, don’t touch my bat!
Your hat?
MY BAT!
Oh that.
There’s my bat, it’s on the mat.
Don’t kill the rat...
But it ate my cat!
But it wears a hat...
It wears a hat?
Yes and it’s fat.
Ohh...Alright. I didn’t really love that cat.
Amen to that...
What was that?!
Errr, I don’t really love that hat.
Oh, my hat?
Yes your hat.
But I love my big black hat.
Oh… then I meant your stupid bat.
Oh my bat...
Yes your bat.
Do you like my big brown mat?
It’s alright but it’s not phat.
What is phat?
Nevermind that, just catch my rat.
P.S. Dark Mage Of Destiny, I wuv you bro. lol
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Amazing poems Dark Mage, short, but well thought out. Great job.Dark Mage Of Destiny wrote:Here are mine to you ^^
Stars
Amongst miljons of stars
you are the light of my life.
Miljons of stars and you who
shine most of them all is
the only thing i see.
Stars....almost as
beutiful as you.
Love
If your cold,
I will warm you.
If your sad,
I will comfort you.
If your afraid,
I shall shield you.
If your happy,
I shall share the happiness with you.
Love...there isnt anything more beautiful to share.
There are 2 poems just for you Anner! hehe since you took the time to do 2, then i thought so could i then! Just for you
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Good Work there Mad Hatter, Anneeeeeeeeeeeeeer!
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Thanks BT, you're always full of kind words
And I totally agree with you on what you said about Dark Mage's poems, they're very romantic! And to think, all for me! lol
EoD, I think you're the only who's ever called me Mad Hatter here. lol, I was wondering when someone would call me that, you beat them to it mon amie!
And I totally agree with you on what you said about Dark Mage's poems, they're very romantic! And to think, all for me! lol
EoD, I think you're the only who's ever called me Mad Hatter here. lol, I was wondering when someone would call me that, you beat them to it mon amie!
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I love your work Anner ^_^
You havent shown us that many poems but you have already displayed talent in numerous genre's.
You havent shown us that many poems but you have already displayed talent in numerous genre's.
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Why thank you Locke! I try my best to keep you all entertained.
The Room With No Ceiling
I opened my eyes.
I reached for the skies.
I touched Zeus's castle.
I buried my smile.
I tried not to hassel.
I tried not to stare.
I felt my heart awaken.
I wondered, but did not dare.
I loved and I hated.
I lived and inhaled it.
I roamed and I saw.
I ignored the biggest flaw.
I cared for the living.
I sang for the giving.
I looked up from my room.
I witnessed Zeus's doom.
This is not finished yet. There will be a second part.
The Room With No Ceiling
I opened my eyes.
I reached for the skies.
I touched Zeus's castle.
I buried my smile.
I tried not to hassel.
I tried not to stare.
I felt my heart awaken.
I wondered, but did not dare.
I loved and I hated.
I lived and inhaled it.
I roamed and I saw.
I ignored the biggest flaw.
I cared for the living.
I sang for the giving.
I looked up from my room.
I witnessed Zeus's doom.
This is not finished yet. There will be a second part.
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Mad Hatter that's pretty damn good.
There are tons of good lines in that, I'd point them out but the flow is so great, that it wouldnt be as good as it is as a whole. - umm...yeah...I think that explains it.
By the way Mad Hatter, makes you seem as though your a little kid or something. hahaha
There are tons of good lines in that, I'd point them out but the flow is so great, that it wouldnt be as good as it is as a whole. - umm...yeah...I think that explains it.
By the way Mad Hatter, makes you seem as though your a little kid or something. hahaha
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That was King awesome!
(pretty lame but it's all i can really say
I can't wait for part two!)
(pretty lame but it's all i can really say
I can't wait for part two!)
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Thank you EoD, Locke, and Dark Mage
Hmmm...I just realized that with the last two lines, I actually ended my poem... .... Therefore, there won't be a second part. I'm sorry Locke.
Hmmm...I just realized that with the last two lines, I actually ended my poem... .... Therefore, there won't be a second part. I'm sorry Locke.
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It's still a good poem. Gosh i need to write some.Λппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:Thank you EoD, Locke, and Dark Mage
Hmmm...I just realized that with the last two lines, I actually ended my poem... .... Therefore, there won't be a second part. I'm sorry Locke.
I'm a facebook whore.
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You should Kawasaki-san, and because I inspired you, you should dedicate one to me! LOL, I'm kidding
I would love to read your poems, *witchy accent* and see what goes through that pretty head of yours, Myyyeeheeheeheeeheee! Ahem....*no accent* I mean........
lol
EoD: "By the way Mad Hatter, makes you seem as though your a little kid or something. hahaha"
(I forgot to say this in my last post ) lol, EoD, I thought I already told you. I'm only 5 years old at heart. , lol, I'm just a baby. Hehehehehehe.
I would love to read your poems, *witchy accent* and see what goes through that pretty head of yours, Myyyeeheeheeheeeheee! Ahem....*no accent* I mean........
lol
EoD: "By the way Mad Hatter, makes you seem as though your a little kid or something. hahaha"
(I forgot to say this in my last post ) lol, EoD, I thought I already told you. I'm only 5 years old at heart. , lol, I'm just a baby. Hehehehehehe.
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Hmm... another work of art Anner. EoD said pretty much everything I could say, but still great job. ^_^
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