Welcome to Anner's!

[Hey]

o_o.

The other poems were Umm.. *runs to find book* ....
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*finds it* ... (my brother was reading through it and He left it under all my junk! ><)
..... The Earth, The Sun and The Moon! and A British Mornings Glory. (those were the first poems I read by you!)

*GASP*!! A British Mornings Glory was one of 'em?! Aahhh!! That's awesome!! No one appreciated that one! I'm so glad you liked it! It's prolly one of my faves, I just love weird poems. Sweetness, I love ya princess.

[Bambi]

I hope you don't mind but my brother saw that poem. He really really liked it. And that just proves how much of a good poem that is. Because well, my brother hates poetry and thats the only poem he has like ever liked. o_o

Yes!! I Loved A British Mornings Glory! Remember i said:
"I Love the Bloody 'ell's (sp?)!"

Seriously Anna! I really really love your poems!

[Hey]

I hope you don't mind but my brother saw that poem. He really really liked it. And that just proves how much of a good poem that is. Because well, my brother hates poetry and thats the only poem he has like ever liked. o_o

Yes!! I Loved A British Mornings Glory! Remember i said:
"I Love the Bloody 'ell's (sp?)!"

Seriously Anna! I really really love your poems!

God no! Why would I mind? I'm glad he liked it (was it "Mend"?)! Wow.... this just keeps getting better and better!.... you're makin me bluuuuush!

Thanks so much princess, you have no idea how much I love ya. XD

[Bambi]

Oh lol! He said he liked how real it was. Oh! Sorry for embarrassing you! But lol its the truth! And you know how (well, you might of forgot xD) but I said In the Earth, The Sun and The Moon poem I said it made me feel calm and relaxed... well Before I went to bed last night i went outside to take a peek at the moon and OMGosh! it was AMAZZZZZZZZZZZZING. It gave me the best feeling ever and your poem built on the feeling! (I hope that made sense) Anyway it was really really.. a brilliant feeling!

[Hey]

.... woah... it feels weird that one of my poems had an effect like that on ya. I'm so happai! You totally just made my month, lol, if not, year. I can now die happy Thanks again princess, you know I love ya.

[Bambi]

Its Okay Anna. Its the truth. I look forward to your new work

[Pyro Psycho]

Yes post more soon. Looking at your work gives me an inspiration to be a pirate

[Hey]

lol, thanks Envy. You too Princess.


Next poem's prreeeeeetty old. Found it a couple of weeks ago.





Flawless

And the people who walk by everyday
unaware of the beings
in the heaven above
the hell below
and the one who walks beside them,
are the ones who will always be
the ones who will always see
the happiness we all long for.

I walked in the wet cold streets of black
under the teary sky.
my feet were one with the water under
and i no longer could see the light.
I saw my haven
but unable to move
I stood in the calming rain.

Looking up, the rain embraced all of my senses.
I tasted the raindrops
and the salty taste made me wonder...
The sky was crying,
oh the sky was crying,
and I was the only one who knew.

[Raoul Duke]

Ooooh. The epiphany at the end was like an orgasmic slap in the face! (in an abstract sort of way)

[Grapes]

lol, it IS you princess!




Mend


I cut your veins and poisoned you
and tonight I'm on my knees.

I know that you hate me
And deep inside you've lost your plea.
You love to hate
The one you hate to love.

I want to tell you that
I'm not worth this misery,
you need to let this hate go
and believe me when i say i cared for you so.
It was all just something in my liberty
and I can't change it,
I can't let it go.

I need to tell you now
that I couldn't say it then,
when it was so easy for you to do so.
And now that I've realized how much I miss you
and that golden feeling,
I find it so hard to escape.
I didn't believe it then,
and I don't believe it now.
I'm sorry but I'm not what you're looking for.

My words were simple,
And simplicity complements truth so well.


EDIT: Just edited a couple of commas, etc, to get a better flow.

Woah, what's all this about Anna? I still can't believe you write poems. You make me sick. Haha! I kid. That's what you get for calling me a, what was it, a "sheman"? And who's this person? I think I just might have the upper hand at the moment.

[Hey]

Woah, what's all this about Anna? I still can't believe you write poems. You make me sick. Haha! I kid. That's what you get for calling me a, what was it, a "sheman"? And who's this person? I think I just might have the upper hand at the moment.

STFU. IHU. WNR, IDATMIG.

[Hey]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... Maetel.jpg
>>> My version of Maetel from Galaxy Express 999 (The first anime I saw after I found out what Anime REALLY is)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... Mariko.jpg
>>> A farewell card for Mariko (She was an exchange student and she was staying at my friend's house. She was here for 9 months, and was probably the most innocent girl I've ever met. She cried for three straight days before leaving, and she was 21... lol... you're never too old to cry your eyes out)
EDIT: ^^^ Feet look extremely weird, but I had 10 mins to color it, and no time to fix it.

[pure_syndicate_XLR]

nicely done, i would totaly go out with your pic.

[Raoul Duke]

nicely done, i would totaly go out with your pic.

I'd do more than that!

[Hey]

nicely done, i would totaly go out with your pic.

I'd do more than that!

lol.





I had a dream about an old friend last night, and it felt so real that I woke up actually crying from happiness. I haven't seen her in 9 years... and... I don't know. It just... really hurts... you know?

I named the poem after her.







Ramona


Half asleep,
Half sunk deep,
I followed you into the blue.

Heart-felt hellos,
That reminded me,
Of that precious young fool.

The talk of old times,
Those silly pocket dimes,
That made us feel so rich.

Our futures to come,
Our dreams and songs,
And our hearty promises.

Lost in those dreams,
We forgot our songs,
And broke our diamond oaths.

And I miss you now,
And wish that somehow,
You’d remember this old fool...

[Nanashi]

Awesome Anna that was great! Peace out .