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Stick to your day job chimp! Uuuh, I mean, chump! :D
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It was.. alright, I s'pose..... I was totally messin'! You suck! Haha!
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That tooootally blew my mind. Can you please, love me?
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That was good. I'm too lazy to say anything else.
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Total votes: 11

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Post by Hey »

Thanks BT luv. :mrgreen:



Your sassy Girl

Am I still your sassy girl?
I saw you today and you looked happy.
Your hair still full of golden curls.
your eyes still the lightest shade of green.
Your lips missing my mine...
Your heart over mine.....
Your eyes saw right through me...
And you danced in the sun.
and you praised the warm feeling.
And your heart was happy.
And your sadness, done.
You were never mine.
But I was always yours.
And I'll always be...
Your only sassy girl.


Lol, I wrote this today! Guess why?! I saw my ex today, the jerk who liked this other girl but didn't know himself....errr....long story.

Anywho, he was a good guy.

Hmmm, this poem's crap. lol, I don't want anyone praising it, I know it sucks. It's my worst poem yet! lol, so don't say anything at all peeps, lets just leave it at that! lol
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I woule like to let you know that I read it.
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Post by Dark Mage Of Destiny »

I would like to say that i didnt read it this time...Becouse im still pretty much having pictures of ''Bob'' and ''Tarzan'' in my head so i cant think straightly :lol:
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Here's a poem i wrote about something that ahppened. the names are fictional. But the truth behind it is real. After looking at this thread i picked up the courage to write out how i felt so Anner thanks to oyu i finally was able to write out what heppened..to Jennifer...


Jennifer’s Death


It became the time to express my mind

To tell the school of what these years led me to find

I stood in front of my fellow students and friends

Looked for the words to express what this situation sends

It was the day of Jennifer’s death

The girl who was fun but secretly did crystal meth

I watched their mournful faces and began to despise

If it weren’t for them, her life wouldn’t have been based on high school lies

As time ticked by, everyone began to whisper

What, when Jennifer tried to talk you didn’t listen but now she’s quite it’s all you can hither?

At last I came to a decision and I let my self speak:

“I’m here today to discuss Jennifer’s death. Something that only happened last weak.

She had the fantasy to be a star

But now she’s gone it’s off so far

She had the mind, spirit and dream

But does that imply you all had to be so mean?

With here gone today I feel I should say

If you guys didn’t feel guilty would you still be here on this sad, sad day? “

No one spoke not a sound was heard

For I knew a silent lesson was finally learned

So I began to speak again

Something that they knew would make a mend

“Everyone would tease and play with her heart

She never got a complement from her peers. Only a simple “good job” for her smarts

Living a life in school, One all its own

Using the love and caring she’s truly shown

Jennifer used her mind not her looks

And got pointed at for always caring a lot of books

But as I think about it you guys weren’t alone.

Some of these hateful traits I have shown.”

I let the words dawn on everyone

Hopefully Jennifer’s long battle will soon be won

I started to speak with a stronger tone

Something that was hard since Jennifer couldn’t use the one she had on her own

“But as I think about all the secrets she hid

would you have known about the drugs she did. No one else did.

She overdosed on ecstasy last night

Trying to find a way out of this high school battle she had to fight.

Now it’s time to own up to our sins.

Forget our pride and get down on our shins.”

With the last word I got on my knees

Not caring if everybody else sees

I looked to the sky

Slowly began to cry

Because of us, Jennifer was the one who had to die

“I’m sorry Jennifer for what I had done.

It’s not your fault. To you it wasn’t anyone’s

We were jerks and for that your gone

You understood the world, you were the only one

Someday I hope you will finally be able to say goodbye

And go on with your future, up in the sky.”

>Mai<



hope you guys like that one ..it means alot to me.
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Post by Hey »

Wow Mai....that was.....I don't even have a word to describe how amazing it was. I'm glad to have helped you gather up the courage to write it.....it truly is amazing. And I'm sorry for what happened. Your poem's full of emotions, it's amazing.....
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Post by Hey »

P.S. Locke, thanks for reading my poem.

P.S. Dark Mage, don't bother reading it, it's crap. Oh and....why do you have an image of Bob and Tarzan...? Is something going on between you three? lol.
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To Anner:

There is this girl name Anner
Sweet, Kind in every manner.
Her eyes are color of the brightest hue.
Sometimes they make me sing the blues.

Oh Anner, what pleases thee?
I will somehow try to satisfy all of your needs.
For your beauty is so mesmerizing
That it can cause a man like me to keep dialing.

A three word letter wouldn't work
Instead three thousand should suffice to look
Wordy it may seem at first
But it will be full of love and shirt.

So I say again to my dear Anner
I love you dear, in every manner.


Hmmm...I need more time for this Anner, but I promise I'll finish it soon. I just need time to put some thought into it. :wink: :wink:
Last edited by noodles87 on Jun 03, 2005 10:47pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Post by Hey »

OMG NOODLES!!! That was the sweetest poem ever!!! :oops: You even had my name in there! And OMG!! You rhymed my name!! \:D/

Lol, so you finally dedicated a poem to me!*sigh* What a gentleman...
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Well I just read all this and since there are no words to describe it I will use smileies :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>
That was harder than expected love means the poems you sick minded people out there and by that I mean the people who mind's go in that dierction without their consant
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Λппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:OMG NOODLES!!! That was the sweetest poem ever!!! :oops: You even had my name in there! And OMG!! You rhymed my name!! \:D/

Lol, so you finally dedicated a poem to me!*sigh* What a gentleman...


He....HEy! I wasnt never called a gentleman.... :cry: Oh well...i guess my poems werent GOOD ENOUGH FOR YOU! ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) ](*,)
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Hahahaahah Dark Mage I loved your poems the same! But you've got to admit, it's pretty awesome to have a poem dedicated to you that has your name it! lol, it makes it so much more personal! :mrgreen:

He even rhymed with my name! *sigh*

I loved your poems Dark Mage, I'm sorry if I didn't indicate it, lol, really, I really did. :mrgreen:
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Autonomy

Faintly, I perceived your insanity.
But never mentioned anything, not even your profanity.
I lost the sincerity I once had with you.
I needed harmony with the words so true.
"Time will unwind itself to show its true form,
And nothing will sanctify your divine vitality."
And my soul breached with the utterance.
And for the final time, I was unleashed.
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Ecstasy

The planet you called home
Green and full of secrets
With a mystery so unkind
Was once called Eden
By the leader of fortune
By the leader of sway
The truth held within the lies
The lies based on the sights
And us, blinded by the diffusion
Of the heaven above, and the hell below.
Finally Karma fell onto place
And Eden relegated into a sea of chaos
Love and hate were twisted and formed
And Earth was the final conclusion.
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Post by Hey »

Lol, I finally sat my bum down and drew something. Mai inspired me to, with her out-of-this-world drawing of ATMH! :mrgreen: I hadn't drawn anything for months....kinda weird! lol, oh well. Hope you guys will like it. lol, guess WHO!?

http://photobucket.com/albums/v221/Anni ... TMH000.jpg

Ahem, excuse the little writings on the background, I drew on the closest piece of paper my hand could reach. lol!
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Damn Anner you're very talented at drawing. All i could do is stick figures. :(

P.S. I finished your poem, not sure about the shirt part.
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Post by Hey »

Thanks Noo-noo! But I'm still afraid of pencil crayons. :mrgreen:

Awwwww, I love it Noo-noo! It's one of the sweetest poems ever!!! And the shirt part, is by far my favorite! :mrgreen: I love shirts dude!!
lol, I've never had a guy write a poem for me, which actually had my name/nickname in it!!
Thanks Noo-noo, I wuwve you. :wink:

I'll be sure to write you one soon!
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