Has anyone ever written an Haiku?? I have last week
And i think its pretty interesting....
Well, the Haiku i had to write, it was like ''5/7/5''...silabes(??)...
I wrote this:
Fureai de ippai tomodachi tsukuritai
(sorry, this computer doesn't accept the japanese writing system! =P So, i cant write in hiragana here... XP)
But the 5/7/5 thing is=
Fu-re-a-i-de --> 5
I-p-pa-i to-mo-da-chi--> 8 (mine had 8 instead of 7! XD)
Tsu-ku-ri-ta-i--> 5
It looks really hard on your first time, but when you do it once, you see that it's not that difficult.
But for me, it was really hard to come any idea.... XD
Haiku/Haikai
Haiku/Haikai
olááá
L'Arc~en~Ciel forever~
o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o
quando pousar e abrir os olhos como seria bom se te encontrasse com um sorriso...
tchau~
L'Arc~en~Ciel forever~
o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o
quando pousar e abrir os olhos como seria bom se te encontrasse com um sorriso...
tchau~
Re: Haiku/Haikai
No, I believe your second line made 7 syllables if you put 'Ip' together. Two letters make a sort of hiccup sound, so it's not really 8 that you think it is.
I've written haikus and tankas (5-7-5-7-7) in English, but I've never attempted to do it in Japanese (strangely).
I'll just make a quick haiku right now:
優しい木
九月の水練
暗い空
Yasashii ki
Kugatsu no suiren
Kurai sora
Gentle trees
September waterlily
Dark sky
I've written haikus and tankas (5-7-5-7-7) in English, but I've never attempted to do it in Japanese (strangely).
I'll just make a quick haiku right now:
優しい木
九月の水練
暗い空
Yasashii ki
Kugatsu no suiren
Kurai sora
Gentle trees
September waterlily
Dark sky
Blue like. Like blue.
~龍子
~龍子
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Re: Haiku/Haikai
i've heard of Haiku's, but i've never been able to remember the sylable system, so, i've never attempted one. i like yours Ryukon. i like Haiku's because, from what i've read, they dont hafta make sense ^_^
Hakaro, what does yours translate as?
Hakaro, what does yours translate as?
Hate cheats?
Love competition?
Son's of Snakes.
See you on the battlefield...
Love competition?
Son's of Snakes.
See you on the battlefield...
Re: Haiku/Haikai
ive written one! Its so cool!!
but i dont even remember mine.. =P
When i remember, ill write here.. but i think it was something about the moon.... oh, i dont remember!
but i dont even remember mine.. =P
When i remember, ill write here.. but i think it was something about the moon.... oh, i dont remember!
Re: Haiku/Haikai
Something like "I want to do a lot of friends on Fureai" ^^Beautiful Sin wrote:Hakaro, what does yours translate as?
olááá
L'Arc~en~Ciel forever~
o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o
quando pousar e abrir os olhos como seria bom se te encontrasse com um sorriso...
tchau~
L'Arc~en~Ciel forever~
o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o
quando pousar e abrir os olhos como seria bom se te encontrasse com um sorriso...
tchau~
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Re: Haiku/Haikai
haiku! yea we made those usually as assignments before in school.
they're very fun to make.
they're very fun to make.
Fall down seven times, stand up eight.
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they are fun, but it was sooo hard for me to have an idea... and it wasn't me who had the idea for the haiku I wrote.
but why do you do haiku on school??? I wanna do it too! XD
but why do you do haiku on school??? I wanna do it too! XD
olááá
L'Arc~en~Ciel forever~
o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o
quando pousar e abrir os olhos como seria bom se te encontrasse com um sorriso...
tchau~
L'Arc~en~Ciel forever~
o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o o(•ω•)o
quando pousar e abrir os olhos como seria bom se te encontrasse com um sorriso...
tchau~
Re: Haiku/Haikai
I wrote one about owls not sure if this is how you do a Haiku but here it is:
Silently the owl flies....
Swiftly threw the night sky,
Happy to be alive
Silently the owl flies....
Swiftly threw the night sky,
Happy to be alive
Alucard=HOT!!!!!!!!!