if i had to choose between the sun or you
i'd choose you;you are my light.
if i had to choose between my heart and soul
or you, i'd choose you.
you have both.
i'd toss the world upside down
if it would make you happy
cuz you happiness is mine too.
what i'm trying to say is that...
.....well....
you're smart fill in the blank.
tell me if this poem is good please
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Re: tell me if this poem is good please
Brilliant
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Re: tell me if this poem is good please
LOL.Saugen auf das pferd wrote:Brilliant
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Who needs imagination when you have a television?
Half of the Dream Team. Sup Mike?
Part of the Sexy Trio BIKI! =3
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Re: tell me if this poem is good please
It's ok. I can understand it which is good 
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Re: tell me if this poem is good please
its better than scorpionwarriors 
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Re: tell me if this poem is good please
That hurt 
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XD"The world isn't perfect. But it's there for us, doing the best it can....that's what makes it so damn beautiful." - Roy Mustang
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Re: tell me if this poem is good please
sorryscorpionwarrior wrote:That hurt
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