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Welcome to Anner's!
This thread includes Anner's poems, art works, aaaannd anything that's got anything to do with her oh-so-many talents! And maybe some photographs she took with her trusty camera!
Edited: Bambi [Stickied Again ^_^]
Edited: Bambi [Stickied Again ^_^]
Last edited by Hey on Apr 25, 2006 8:10pm, edited 2 times in total.
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~Marionette~
The trembling voice you had never jingled so well.
Your trepidation, your anxieties were frozen inside of your well of reveries.
The ears which belonged to you and you only, never heeded to my utters.
The words spoken by your tongue never influenced well.
I am but a marionette, a pawn, who grasps nothing of this tedious world.
I am but a pseudo, a mindless being who saunters over gold, without appraisal.
Salvage me and perhaps, I can be worthwhile. Only then, will I absorb your lexis, and yearn to expand my mind and to be a boundless piece of art.
"Rain never tasted so sweet." you murmured, as bloody teardrops stumbled upon your tongue.
"Avenge my death." you pleaded with your last words, as I stood before you with bloody hands.
And you expired, and the world came tumbling down.
The trembling voice you had never jingled so well.
Your trepidation, your anxieties were frozen inside of your well of reveries.
The ears which belonged to you and you only, never heeded to my utters.
The words spoken by your tongue never influenced well.
I am but a marionette, a pawn, who grasps nothing of this tedious world.
I am but a pseudo, a mindless being who saunters over gold, without appraisal.
Salvage me and perhaps, I can be worthwhile. Only then, will I absorb your lexis, and yearn to expand my mind and to be a boundless piece of art.
"Rain never tasted so sweet." you murmured, as bloody teardrops stumbled upon your tongue.
"Avenge my death." you pleaded with your last words, as I stood before you with bloody hands.
And you expired, and the world came tumbling down.
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The Willow Tree Spoke to Me
The hollow tree whispered disease
Willow was her name she said
All the hope inside her ceased
The anger in her heart was fed
My companions have all left me
Were the words carried by the wind
All I've left is hatred you see
Oh, the humans have all sinned
I let her be in the cold, hostile weather
Snow was starting to cover the hill
Her soul blew away like a feather
The hunt has begun...They're in for the kill
I let her go and left the tree hollow
Yet I did not allow her secrets to follow....
The hollow tree whispered disease
Willow was her name she said
All the hope inside her ceased
The anger in her heart was fed
My companions have all left me
Were the words carried by the wind
All I've left is hatred you see
Oh, the humans have all sinned
I let her be in the cold, hostile weather
Snow was starting to cover the hill
Her soul blew away like a feather
The hunt has begun...They're in for the kill
I let her go and left the tree hollow
Yet I did not allow her secrets to follow....
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Tomorrow was Today
I woke up tomorrow, knowing I missed today.
I looked at my hands, and my skin looked grey.
I touched my hair, and felt it dull.
I looked at my legs and saw my veins,
And thousands of little brown spots.
I looked in my mind, and saw nothing.
Only memories from tomorrow falling.
I looked in my heart, and found it broken.
And saw the life in there, frozen.
I opened my eyes, and it was today.
And tomorrow was a day away.
I looked at my hands, and my skin full of life!
I touched my hair, and felt it silk.
I looked at my legs and they looked smooth,
They were as strong as a tree's roots.
I finally smiled as I found in my mind,
The bittersweet memories of my time.
I closed my eyes, as I lied in my bed.
Only to find, what age has my head.
I woke up tomorrow, knowing I missed today.
I looked at my hands, and my skin looked grey.
I touched my hair, and felt it dull.
I looked at my legs and saw my veins,
And thousands of little brown spots.
I looked in my mind, and saw nothing.
Only memories from tomorrow falling.
I looked in my heart, and found it broken.
And saw the life in there, frozen.
I opened my eyes, and it was today.
And tomorrow was a day away.
I looked at my hands, and my skin full of life!
I touched my hair, and felt it silk.
I looked at my legs and they looked smooth,
They were as strong as a tree's roots.
I finally smiled as I found in my mind,
The bittersweet memories of my time.
I closed my eyes, as I lied in my bed.
Only to find, what age has my head.
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Then Is Gone
It's too late my beloved one, then is gone.
It's not your fault though, I'll be ok.
But you know what the sad thing is?
You were never even really there.
And I tried so hard to grab your hand...
But you kept falling...with that stare.
And you knew I saw right through you,
When the world got in your way.
Your voice was so small and faded,
And so I hid in here jaded.
But it's over now, so I'll be ok,
And I still love you anyway.
Now, all I wonder about is,
The point in all that screaming,
Because you weren't listening anyway.
I'm sorry but then is gone,
The only thing we have is now.
It's too late my beloved one, then is gone.
It's not your fault though, I'll be ok.
But you know what the sad thing is?
You were never even really there.
And I tried so hard to grab your hand...
But you kept falling...with that stare.
And you knew I saw right through you,
When the world got in your way.
Your voice was so small and faded,
And so I hid in here jaded.
But it's over now, so I'll be ok,
And I still love you anyway.
Now, all I wonder about is,
The point in all that screaming,
Because you weren't listening anyway.
I'm sorry but then is gone,
The only thing we have is now.
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All of the poems posted above, are old. Like....some of them are REALLY old. lol
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They were terrific Anner! I loved them!
I especially liked the first one. I have read it before ^_^
Maybe I will post up some of my poems!
I especially liked the first one. I have read it before ^_^
Maybe I will post up some of my poems!
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Thanks yo. *crosses her arms and makes a W with her fingers*
translated version of the statement above:
Thanks Locke! *blows kisses and bows*
They're horrible though. Horrible grammer, and I probabely have a few spelling mistakes...but too lazy to check.
Took me a while to find them (except for Marionette and The Willow Tree Spoke to Me.... I had previously posted them on the forum, lol)
God they're cra**y. Lol. Oh well, I was young and....mad. But.... I'm still mad....and young.....lol....nevermind.
translated version of the statement above:
Thanks Locke! *blows kisses and bows*
They're horrible though. Horrible grammer, and I probabely have a few spelling mistakes...but too lazy to check.
Took me a while to find them (except for Marionette and The Willow Tree Spoke to Me.... I had previously posted them on the forum, lol)
God they're cra**y. Lol. Oh well, I was young and....mad. But.... I'm still mad....and young.....lol....nevermind.
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Nah you're old. But there weren't any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors I could see.
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Locke wrote:Nah you're old. But there weren't any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors I could see.
Dude, I'm 5 years old at heart. Can't you tell? lol.
Ummm, I didn't even bother to check and see whether I had any spelling/grammatical errors....soooo..... *shrieks, then runs away*
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Brilliance in the light.
great friends: Jesus Christ. Dragon X. Locke. Ender. Bambi. Russel.
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Great Anner! Why not make some new ones now?
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Encore! Encore!
Anner those were brilliant! I love the first and third ones!
Anner those were brilliant! I love the first and third ones!
I wish to the starry sky, I pray to the Earth
and swear to a love that will not fade.
and swear to a love that will not fade.
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When it comes to poetry, grammatical errors are to be overlooked. A person poetic work should not be judged by "Oh! She forgot to add a period!!!" All that really counts is the effort, emotions, and meaning inputed into the poem. Great stuff Anner.Λппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:Locke wrote:Nah you're old. But there weren't any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors I could see.
Dude, I'm 5 years old at heart. Can't you tell? lol.
Ummm, I didn't even bother to check and see whether I had any spelling/grammatical errors....soooo..... *shrieks, then runs away*
I'm a facebook whore.