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re: Another poem!;)

Posted: May 03, 2005 1:58pm
by Yasashii Yatsamoto
tile: Dawn of love

sometimes I weep when you look into my eyes.
causing me to think where you want me tryly or not.
I spend my lonely time alone on a hill at dawn.
I feel alone when your not there in my heart,
why do you wanna leave me behind

should I move on or shall I stay here waiting for your love to come back.
till the day od dawn I will wait till the day I will have my love in my heart.

re: Another poem!;)

Posted: May 03, 2005 4:03pm
by blackrose_r7
=D> I liked it. I Know its just a poem but you shouldent wait forever for someone to love you.
You have to make youre move also.

re: Another poem!;)

Posted: May 03, 2005 6:50pm
by Angel of Music
Yeah. Even though it is a poem, if you're waiting for love, then just try and get to know people better and someone will surely turn up one day that's just right for you.

re: Another poem!;)

Posted: May 03, 2005 6:56pm
by Darker Angel
nice poem...i like it

re: Another poem!;)

Posted: May 04, 2005 11:24pm
by Angel of Music
Thank you, Darker Angel. :mrgreen:

Re: re: Another poem!;)

Posted: May 05, 2005 12:09pm
by blackrose_r7
shinzoluverneo1 wrote:Thank you, Darker Angel. :mrgreen:
I think she's refering to Yasashii's poem.

re: Another poem!;)

Posted: Jun 17, 2005 3:55am
by Commander~Lightning~Spike
Your a natural at writing poems.