Re: re: Welcome to Anner's!
Posted: Oct 22, 2005 11:37pm
lol, huh...?Homunculus_Envy wrote:O.O I thought it was chicken scratchΛппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:Locke wrote:^_^
...lolSpoilerShowHahahaha! I liked your little lol, touche.
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lol, huh...?Homunculus_Envy wrote:O.O I thought it was chicken scratchΛппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:Locke wrote:^_^
...lolSpoilerShowHahahaha! I liked your little lol, touche.
hahaha, and double huh...?Locke wrote:crap there is a rule against cutting raw meat with a knife and then cutting the meat again after it is cooked with the same knife without washing it isnt there?
Thats really pretty hun. I like it a lot. It really makes you think sometimes......but keep it up, I love all your work. You know you have a supporter here for life hun. I can't wait for the drawing. I bet it will be swell. ^^Λппεr The Mad Hatter wrote:The Love Note
I am the love note,
Packed away among the countless others,
Gathering dust under your bed,
Where the monsters sleep,
And dampness rules.
After my beauty has lost it's face,
You will once again find me,
But my words are still pure,
And the feelings behind still true.
You will read me once, and remember my youth,
But that is all you will remember,
And my secret will, as always, remain hidden.
This love I contain is eternal,
But to you it is merely words.
And alas...
I no longer reside beneath your bed.
Dampness no longer rules me,
And I no longer sleep with the monsters.
I am now among the forgotten.
You will never read me again.
I am now a true love note,
And you will never know.
Whaddaya guys think?the narrarator (the love note, lol) sounds like...a kid to me. you know? I don't know, like the vocabulary I used and stuff is just....bah!! I don't know! but yeah, i made it sound innocent.
the lines:
"I no longer reside beneath your bed.
Dampness no longer rules me,
And I no longer sleep with the monsters."
kinda portray the fact that, the love note (yes, I am referring to it as a person) liked it under the person's bed, and even though "dampness" and "monsters" sound negative, it sounds like it's missing them. ok, in other words, the negative, is actually positive, and the positive is actually negative in this entire poem. I kinda got that feeling.
Anyway, LOL!! this is WEIRD!!! I'm commenting on my own poem!!! lol, as if someone else wrote it! hahahah...I think I should stop.
Anywho-haws. KiDA's poems inspired me to write poems again, it had been a while since I'd written anything. So Thank you KiDA (and such crazy poems too, lol I was right about you afterall KiDA! "You will forever be, the true madness in me."
oh the craziness.
Locke and Homunculus_Envy, your drawings are comin'.