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Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 14, 2008 3:16pm
by Slash
Or you could always go the artistic, controversial way and show pictures of gas masks, armed soldiers, anarchy signs and bombs, as a way of portraying what some countries portray peace as. Think outside of the box, yo!
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 22, 2008 3:50pm
by Goldenwolf
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 22, 2008 10:42pm
by divinephoenix
I like the first one better
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 23, 2008 2:44am
by Goldenwolf
haaha yeah everyone does XD
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 24, 2008 6:15pm
by Slash
Haha, there's that badass picture I liked in your talent section thread. Very good on the coloring of this one. I see progress, which is not something I'm just saying to be nice (I feel no need to impress anyone, so genuinely my compliments are merited). The tints and shades are much more subtle than your first one, which makes it that much better. Something I did notice that didn't really strike my fancy was the color of the tube. It being kin colored, I was confused at first as to what I was looking at. Then I saw the execution of the whole 'transparency' dealio and it struck me that I may be semi-retarded, but I would watch out on future projects on making different objects that are touching contrast each other. In this case, since the color could be anything, I'd go with something a bit more fun and summer-like, like hot pink or a light blue. I like the transparency idea, but I'd also add some glare to show the glossiness/reflection of sunlight. Very good though!
Second one I'm a bit hesitant of. The first and foremost rule of thumb is to never mix raster and vector images (Mixing your drawing with a real-life picture), especially when the picture is low-res. This one isn't too pixelated, but I do see some fuzziness. I do see you added some wrinkles, which look good, only I'd add some width to the lines where appropriate to add depth. They look a bit flat at the moment.
Good job though, keep up the great work.
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 24, 2008 6:33pm
by scorpionwarrior
Maybe with the second one you could use the effects in photoshop to make the background look more part of the picture. Also the lines added to the pants to make them look baggy, well bottom part looks great but above that, they kinda just look like lines and squiggles.
I like the effect you did with the tube in the first one. Only problem I see is the proportions of the bigger girl, her body seems a bit long and skinny.
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 25, 2008 8:02am
by Goldenwolf
hahahah yeah i know i think i just wanted to throw a background behind Lazerus! and Wolf's hips are too skinny XD HEhehehe I could only think of orange for the tube, and i forgot to add the shine to it but i will when i get back home!! thanks for all the comments guys already colouring a new picture!
oh and when i get home i'll upload the finished pic of lazerus before i slapped him on the fire XD
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 26, 2008 12:46pm
by Goldenwolf
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 27, 2008 5:53am
by divinephoenix
The hands look really weird, too small. And theres a proportion problem. But your coloring is improving.
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 28, 2008 3:31pm
by Goldenwolf
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 28, 2008 3:34pm
by scorpionwarrior
lol, perhaps should put warning to younger users not to look at that.
However it's good, no real problems other than arms bend at weird spots and looks like one of his fingers are being broken or he lost it hehe.
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 28, 2008 3:39pm
by Goldenwolf
Heheheh okay!! And I can never do hands D:
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 28, 2008 3:42pm
by scorpionwarrior
lol they were pretty good this time apart from that one finger XD
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 28, 2008 3:44pm
by Goldenwolf
hahaha thankies

Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 29, 2008 9:58am
by Goldenwolf
Re: Art/Design Help!
Posted: May 30, 2008 3:45am
by divinephoenix
better! you're getting good!