Absolute Anime

The sky was red and the grass was blue, and I was there just loving you. Drugs and sex and battle scars, is all of it written in the stars? Are we just pawns in a game of chess. I love her more, she loves me less. Sex is good, sex is bad, those who can't decide are sad. Is it love or is it lust, should I believe in Faith and Trust? Pain is pleasure, pleasure is pain, ask me again and I'll go insane.

Excellent

Tis very Kewl

really cool. keep em comin!

that was cool!

thats as sooo.....cool(exellent)

^^ yay i finally got to reading it and it is exellent ^^ i would love to hear somemore of your work

Excellent! Very good! Keep it up!

i luv that poem soooooooooo much. i would love to see more of your work. i espesialy loved the last line.
"Pain is pleasure, pleasure is pain, ask me again and I'll go insane."
perfictly awsome i thought.

Good.
I've been taught that poetry is the right words in the right order. And it seems you really thaught this thrugh

I wish I could come up with that. Exellent work!

A unique piece of work with a dash of darkness. hmm..... I like it

...im not going 2 lie...u have a long ways 2 go but u do have the making of a very talented writer...

that was awsome i loved it((exelent))

That was a masterpiece. I love it
Express sex in a good and bad mood
Keep it up

Nice rhyme scheme

I LOVE IT!!!! all the sex-stuff in the poem is a big turn on too