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My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 18, 2006 10:55am
by Zeromancer's Angel
You who i dream of
not can take you away
my black dove
you... My lover...


Stay with me forever
our love will endeavour
I love you....
My lover


In the winter i am cold
certain secrets never told
you embrace me with your arm
When i am with you there is no harm


If you ask me what i want to do
i want to sit here and think of you
you and only you ...
My Lover...


Dedicated to : Alexiel Strife... My hun-hun

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 18, 2006 11:06am
by Spetsnaz
Awww that's so sweet :mrgreen: . I'm happy for you. I hope you two will be very happy together :mrgreen:

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 18, 2006 11:08am
by The Procrastinator
A bit of a cliche...
It kinda sounds like you... wrote whatever was on your mind. It's little dry, but then again that could be your style. Writing from the top of your head isn't a bad thing, don't get me wrong, but it just doesn't seem like you put too much effort into it.

I'm sure he'll like it though. It's always nice to have things dedicated to you.

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 18, 2006 11:11am
by Zeromancer's Angel
Twilight demon wrote:Awww that's so sweet :mrgreen: . I'm happy for you. I hope you two will be very happy together :mrgreen:

^_^ thankies Twilight

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 18, 2006 4:40pm
by Ayame_Kodoku
Wow, that's incredibly sweet and the poem's very good. Excellent! :wink:

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:35am
by Zeromancer's Angel
thankies ^_^ ^_^

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:46am
by Alexiel Strife
Wow this this the first love poem anyones written for me ^ ^"
I LOVE YOUUU!
I LOVE YOUUU!!
I LOVE YOUUU!!!!

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:50am
by Zeromancer's Angel
I LOVE YOU TOO!!! ^_^ -_- ^_^

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:52am
by Alexiel Strife
did you see me _ _!

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:54am
by htt10101
thats a very nice poem. alexiel strife...you're very lucky

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:57am
by Zeromancer's Angel
thankyou everyone for your compliments


see you where? send me a linky babe....^_^

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:57am
by Alexiel Strife
I know It's like a dream. :heh:

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 9:59am
by Zeromancer's Angel
g2g babe

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 19, 2006 11:58am
by OniKira
very nice, heartwarming!

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 20, 2006 5:48am
by Zeromancer's Angel
^_^

Re: My Lover ... By: Lillith

Posted: Apr 20, 2006 6:21am
by Biki
i like it. its sweet.