Rekindled Feelings...
Posted: Oct 21, 2007 12:22pm
So Naive
are these feelings
feelings rekindled
feelings of joy
feelings of liveliness
feelings of cluelessness
feelings of hope
they are mine lone
mine to hone
to cherish
and to make a memory
But,like the fire
there are also rekindled feelings
feelings of hatred and distrust,
feelings of endless desire
feelings of futileness
the only feeling I have left to hone...
is love..
love for another,love for the family
loving of friends.
I need to rekindle these feelings,too...
but for now,I let my feelings fly
in my actions
in my eyes
you can see them
these rekindled feelings....
are these feelings
feelings rekindled
feelings of joy
feelings of liveliness
feelings of cluelessness
feelings of hope
they are mine lone
mine to hone
to cherish
and to make a memory
But,like the fire
there are also rekindled feelings
feelings of hatred and distrust,
feelings of endless desire
feelings of futileness
the only feeling I have left to hone...
is love..
love for another,love for the family
loving of friends.
I need to rekindle these feelings,too...
but for now,I let my feelings fly
in my actions
in my eyes
you can see them
these rekindled feelings....
i like your spirit in the poem, however i think that you might make it better by using some synonyms. a few more unusual words in place of common words like hate, hopelessness, despair. i think that would add a lot. good job.