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A womans' touch

Posted: Nov 30, 2007 3:36pm
by The Realist
By: Me
Date: 11/29/07

Everyday I feel the touch of a woman.
A feeling of warmth and gentleness.
The tips of a pure womans' fingers,
Sends waves through me of pure kindness.
Like the feeling of getting a smile,
Glad that it is only for you.
With my reaction of being happy,
And gladly smile back, Thank you.
The soft palm creates a transcending feeling,
A feeling that cleanses my soul.
Enough force and power within a touch,
Can make my heart become whole.
It erases the heart-aches and pain,
The sorrow, loneliness, and hatred.
And replaces them with love and care,
Making sure I will no longer dread.
But the feeling of a hug from one,
Carries the love within me.
A warmth of thy embrance of another,
Stunned for the great feeling for me.
My face starts to flood tears.
The darkness within gets crushed.
I'm complete, pure but helpless,
To the touch of a womans' trust.

Re: A womans' touch

Posted: Dec 01, 2007 12:26pm
by Master InuYasha
:D Awesome!

Re: A womans' touch

Posted: Dec 02, 2007 9:11am
by The Realist
Thank you! I had plenty of people review it and tel me what they thought. Anyone else?

Re: A womans' touch

Posted: Dec 02, 2007 11:23am
by Motoko Chan
It's awesome!!!I luv it 100% \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ :mrgreen: :mrgreen: =D> =D> =D>

Re: A womans' touch

Posted: Dec 03, 2007 6:30pm
by Aoi Sakuraba
very nice! 10/10

Re: A womans' touch

Posted: Dec 17, 2007 1:57pm
by Hey
i'll be honest.
it reminded me of sexually abusive mothers. i had a normal childhood thank you very much.

but yeah, hey, good job.

Re: A womans' touch

Posted: Dec 23, 2007 2:42am
by Biki
it was very sweet. i love it realist. :)