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Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Jan 09, 2008 6:59am
by scorpionwarrior
I decided to try a new type of poem, not my usual random ones.
kinda started changing to the end, but meh, it was my first try at one of these.

SEARCHING FOR THE UNKNOWN

I search the streets for something,
something that i have no knowledge of yet,
yet if i find it,
it could leave me searching,
searching for this again,
again cause it's easily broken,
broken like a vase made of thin glass,
glass as fragile as a heart,
heart? is that what i'm searching for,
for something, someone,
someone that seeks my support,
support to help them up when they are down,
down from the worlds dread,
dread that breaks these hearts,
hearts that break in many ways,
ways that are undescribable,
undescribable to anyone,
anyone that has felt this feeling,
feeling of loneliness and sorrow,
sorrow for not seeing,
seeing the unknown,
unknown that is the MANY,
many feelings of the "heart".

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Jan 11, 2008 8:53am
by Fujiwara
Woww, that was awesome!! I got goosebumps! Keep up the good work ^__^

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Jan 12, 2008 5:12am
by josh
wat

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 06, 2008 6:22am
by Biki
i loved that poem scorpy. now i feel the need to read more of your poetry. GIVE ME MORE! >O >D

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 06, 2008 2:00pm
by scorpionwarrior
thanks Fuji and Biki, and I'll try and make more poems Biki

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 06, 2008 3:06pm
by Biki
yay. ^-^ this is the first one of yours ive read so far. must read more. >.> *goes looking*

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 06, 2008 6:03pm
by Fujiwara
Yes, write more, scorpy. Write more

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 09, 2008 4:43am
by Kibsy~
=] wow scarpsy you have a talent for this... why haven't you been writing all the time...?

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 09, 2008 5:15am
by scorpionwarrior
Well as i said in the chat, got lazy but mostly needed Inspiration to start writing again, maybe i should make a collection of my poems that i've put on here, cause there are others from before i lost the net

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 10, 2008 4:25pm
by Biki
go look for them. o.o

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 10, 2008 5:19pm
by scorpionwarrior
I did, they got deleted, but I found some that I posted on my own site that I also posted here, and so they're already posted.

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 10, 2008 6:02pm
by Fujiwara
Then write more? I'll be your muse ^^

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 11, 2008 7:44pm
by Hardcore
I like it!


































1400 posts :)

Re: Searching for the unknown (poem)

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 3:51am
by scorpionwarrior
Thanks and congrats Nelly. Also If anyone has any topics for some Poems for me, post them here or pm them to me.