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Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 3:48pm
by Pennyroyal Tea
Dear Angel in my outstretched hand
Who's saved me with her love divine
Who's beauty and grace both intertwined
Has stopped the wanderer's eye

Dear Angel in my loving arms
Who I swear will come no harm
The sands of time will never erase
This kiss that I have come to taste

Dear Angel of such euphoric bliss
Whom heaven does surely miss
Who's tender lips I long to kiss
I'll beat you bloody with my fist <--- couldn't think of anything else and I kept it for laughs

Dear Angel who I love so much
You having me shaking in your touch
Even miles apart I'll never fear
'cause in my heart you're always there


There we have it, love it or hate it. If you love it thanks if you hate it [censored] you =D

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 3:51pm
by Hardcore
:) I like it Neo. It's awesome I laughed at the bloody fist part though :D

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 3:51pm
by Kaoru Hanabishi
i like it is nice :D nice work

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 3:52pm
by Aoi Sakuraba
I absolutely love it Andre. It's great 10/10 in my opinion. Makes my envy the person you wrote it about

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 4:30pm
by Jade_Steel_Hawk
I like it. You must be bipolar for writing that. Hehe. :lol: =D>

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 8:04pm
by Bambi
Genius. I loved it. <3

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 15, 2008 12:32am
by The Evil Russell Crowe
Me likez very muchly.

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 15, 2008 1:25pm
by Athos.
Very well written, even the fist part.

I beat my lovers as well

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 17, 2008 8:56am
by SPEEDjammer [DA]
Very nice :)

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 17, 2008 9:09am
by Sara [DA]
Wow that was good, keep up the good work!

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 17, 2008 1:18pm
by Yuki~
very good ^^

Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

Posted: Feb 18, 2008 5:02pm
by Biki
nothing but praise popz, nothing but praise. 8) :D