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me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 4:50pm
by Kaoru Hanabishi
I wrote for aoi chan, 30mins job... so hope you all likey

My First Valentine

I’m lucky that you’re my valentine
I couldn’t think of someone else be mine
I think of you all the time
You are always on my mind

You wondered how you look tonight
I said you’re looking fine
And it was almost nine
I hope we can make it in time

First we went to dine
We got to the restaurant in time
People looked to my side
And thought she looked so divine

Late it was the night
Slowly walking under the moonlight
We sat and gazed at the night sky
Whispering our thoughts on our minds

You fell silently on my shoulder
Softly I cradle you asleep in my arms
Carrying you quietly back to mine
That was my first Valentine

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 4:54pm
by Aoi Sakuraba
i love it, its cute. thanks hun :) 10/10

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 4:56pm
by Biki
carried her back to yours? :o my my. ;) i liked it, but she feel asleep in a restaurant?! :O

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 5:40pm
by Jade_Steel_Hawk
Aww it's cute. ^^
Someone should write me a poem like that. :(

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 6:16pm
by Kaoru Hanabishi
Biki wrote:carried her back to yours? :o my my. ;) i liked it, but she feel asleep in a restaurant?! :O
naw that part we left the restruant and went outside already biki sorry im not good at it :P
Jade_Steel_Hawk wrote:Aww it's cute. ^^
Someone should write me a poem like that. :(
im sure you got someone hiding around, or a phone book of guys waiting for u jadey ;)

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 6:35pm
by Jade_Steel_Hawk
A stalker?! Nooooo!!!!! XD

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 6:37pm
by Kaoru Hanabishi
blah, your a pretty gal im sure u got a few genuine guys :P

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 15, 2008 4:44pm
by Hardcore
I liked it Kaoru.
True love.

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 16, 2008 9:22am
by Yuki~
oh that's so cute ^^'
i wish i had someone to write things like this to me.. -__-'

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 16, 2008 2:57pm
by Commander Sparx
Awww that is cute, it’s my first Valentine too. Nice poem, keep up thegood work.

Re: me wrotey...

Posted: Feb 19, 2008 6:38am
by Biki
Kaoru Hanabishi wrote:
Biki wrote:carried her back to yours? :o my my. ;) i liked it, but she feel asleep in a restaurant?! :O
naw that part we left the restruant and went outside already biki sorry im not good at it :P
nah. you're wonderful at it. ^-^ twas sweet. :)