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whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 1:05pm
by Snowy
the shading is crap i know, im talking about the drawing, i dont want to put clothes on her then have people complain the arm is too long (i already fixed that lol)
so er... oh yeah! shes naked at the moment n.n so careful n.n
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 1:13pm
by Koekiemonster
i think the left leg should be 'turned' a bit so it is more in line with the knee.... if you know what i mean

... maybe it's just the shaded part.
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 1:16pm
by scorpionwarrior
I would have to say, belly hole thingo is too big lol o.o. Maybe sharp edges need to be curved a bit in some places and face looks a bit uneven (deformed kinda). Other than that, I don't notice much else.
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 1:24pm
by Snowy
the white cheekbone thingy?
LOL "belly hole thingo" awwwweome LOL
ty : )
(i see the edges, but the outline wont be there once the skin color is added

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Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 2:21pm
by The Evil Russell Crowe
Belly Button looks retarded.
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 2:53pm
by Snowy
i love you! but focus on the drawing and not the shading n.n gaaaah
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 6:37pm
by Nyx
She looks like she had a mini penis or a really large clit.
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 6:50pm
by Gaming Goddess
Yeah, the belly button is really [censored] up. And she's not curvy at all. But I don't know if you were going for the ruler look or not
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 7:55pm
by Snowy
ok i put some skin on her x.x
is that any better?
(for some reason that statement reminds me of Silence of the Lambs n.n put the lotion in the basket lol)
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 9:48pm
by Tyche
Is it just me, or does her head look too small?
And she really doesn't have much hip to her.
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 10:38pm
by Cold Revolver
Nyx wrote:She looks like she had a mini penis or a really large clit.
Look at you.. always thinking about party favors.. comes as no surprise really..
Anyways the drawing looks good, anatomy is there I suggest working on the face a bit, the head looks good. Your a pretty decent artist. =-]
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jun 30, 2008 11:55pm
by The Evil Russell Crowe
Haha, I can see his dick.
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jul 01, 2008 9:35am
by Snowy
*dies* yeah ill work on the face
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jul 01, 2008 11:25am
by Snowy
i hope this is better n.n
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jul 01, 2008 11:28am
by Snowy
the face shading is messed up plz dont comment x.x i got it ^^
Re: whats wrong with this drawing please?
Posted: Jul 01, 2008 3:13pm
by The Evil Russell Crowe
Kid, you're doin' fine.