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Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 06, 2008 11:06pm
by Ocean9ty
Hei guys.its a pleasure been here,i just started publishing my lng awaited anime story obus the samurai king. I jst posted episode 1 on my blog yesterday obusanime.blogspot.com episode 1 is broken into 3 parts.bt i advise u read the introduction segment b4 u proceed to d main thing.go c it at my blog and tell me what you tink.thanx
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 06, 2008 11:28pm
by scorpionwarrior
Whoa... Much work needs to be done spelling and grammar wise and I still don't think even then I could understand it
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 07, 2008 10:01am
by Ocean9ty
Thanx scorpion king i realy appretiate it,if i get more response frm guys lyk u,my project wil b a bomb.u cn tel others about it,u will see a massive improvement when i post episode 2.if u read the introduction,more u will understand the whole thing. Obusanime.blogspot.com is the place to be,u could help me tell others and make it popular,u are the bomb
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 07, 2008 6:59pm
by scorpionwarrior
The name's scorpionwarrior =o. One tip I can give you for story writing, don't use text talk. Examples of this would be using words like: B4(before) , U(You) and so on.
If you know you can't spell well, then use a spell checker to make sure it's all good.
Hope this helps
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 07, 2008 7:39pm
by Ocean9ty
I wil surely do that scorpionwarrior.tanx a million times i wont 4get u when this project becomes massive.dnt 4get to help mk it popujar by telling others to check it out.tanx a million
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 08, 2008 5:56pm
by Boxcar Bob
Ocean9ty wrote:Hei guys.its a pleasure been here,i just started publishing my lng awaited anime story obus the samurai king. I jst posted episode 1 on my blog yesterday obusanime.blogspot.com episode 1 is broken into 3 parts.bt i advise u read the introduction segment b4 u proceed to d main thing.go c it at my blog and tell me what you tink.thanx
Yes?
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 09, 2008 1:56am
by Ocean9ty
Giani rivera i couldnt get ur message bt still tanx.i will unleaching episode 2 by friday.just help me get more viewers on my blog obusanime.blogspot.com am creating what could be the best anime series ever there i posted episode 1 some time ago and its already a hit,bt episode 2 promises more.jst keep viewing and telling others abot my anime and you will have no dull moment.
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 09, 2008 7:25am
by Tyche
I can hardly read half of it. ](./images/smilies/wall.gif "Brick wall")
If you're trying to put it in quickly, don't. Poor spelling is only going to hinder you. Take you're time when you're posting your story. It's not going to just disappear.
Your characters talk very strangely to each other. Is english your second language? You should talk to an editor and have them help you, or post in your first language and have it translated later. (that's, if you ever decided to really go through with your anime.)
I was expecting a video. 
Like, with talking and such. Not an "in the making".
Are you working on this with anyone? If you aren't, you should, if you're truely serious about making an anime.
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 10, 2008 2:30pm
by Boxcar Bob
Ocean9ty wrote:Giani rivera i couldnt get ur message bt still tanx.i will unleaching episode 2 by friday.just help me get more viewers on my blog obusanime.blogspot.com am creating what could be the best anime series ever there i posted episode 1 some time ago and its already a hit,bt episode 2 promises more.jst keep viewing and telling others abot my anime and you will have no dull moment.
This would go nicely with your testicles 
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 11, 2008 3:45am
by Hardcore
Um.. What? Not.. legible.
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 11, 2008 8:09am
by Tyche
Gianni Rivera wrote:Ocean9ty wrote:Giani rivera i couldnt get ur message bt still tanx.i will unleaching episode 2 by friday.just help me get more viewers on my blog obusanime.blogspot.com am creating what could be the best anime series ever there i posted episode 1 some time ago and its already a hit,bt episode 2 promises more.jst keep viewing and telling others abot my anime and you will have no dull moment.
A big hit, you say? I saw no comments, and I find it hard to believe that something written so illegibly could be a hit.
Re: Obus the samurai king
Posted: Dec 11, 2008 12:14pm
by Goldenwolf
LULZ poor bloke
