Fan Fiction, but only just a start
Posted: Feb 19, 2009 8:13pm
I would first like to note that the fan fiction is about Yutaka Watari and Kazutaka Muraki, both characters of Yoko Matsushita's manga and anime series, "Yami no Matseui", or also kown as "Descenants of Darkness". I do not own any of the characters or show at all.
I would also like to note that this fan fiction is a bit 'yaoi'(boy on boy love), BUT, it is not too excplicit(sp?)... not yet, anyway. :3).
I have no written very much yet, but here is the prologue. Please tell me what you think of it, what I could change, etc. Thank you! <3
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Watari Yutaka & Muraki Kazutaka
~fan fiction~
By: Elizabeth
Prologue: As he started to wake up, he could feel the cold, metal table that caused him to have goose bumps. Laying there in the dark, he tried to sit up, but he felt his wrists and ankles were restrained by big, thick leather belts. A door suddenly creaks open, and closed shortly after. Clomp, clomp, clomp, footsteps came from the door and got closer and closer to him. Silence fell... then flick!, a big, bright light came on right above him. He flinched and closed his eyes. He tried to peek one open, but without his glasses, it was even harder to see. Suddenly, a sharp, thin, ice cold object was rested on his bare chest, which made him shudder and shiver. A chuckle was heard right next to him. “Mr. Yutaka Watari...” the cold voice said, but with a bit of enthusiasm.
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Yeah, that's all I have so far. I need to add more to the prologue... but I haven't decided what yet. D:
I thank you if you take the time reading it <3 It would mean a lot to me, too, if you could reply. = D thanks a bunch! <3
I would also like to note that this fan fiction is a bit 'yaoi'(boy on boy love), BUT, it is not too excplicit(sp?)... not yet, anyway. :3).
I have no written very much yet, but here is the prologue. Please tell me what you think of it, what I could change, etc. Thank you! <3
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Watari Yutaka & Muraki Kazutaka
~fan fiction~
By: Elizabeth
Prologue: As he started to wake up, he could feel the cold, metal table that caused him to have goose bumps. Laying there in the dark, he tried to sit up, but he felt his wrists and ankles were restrained by big, thick leather belts. A door suddenly creaks open, and closed shortly after. Clomp, clomp, clomp, footsteps came from the door and got closer and closer to him. Silence fell... then flick!, a big, bright light came on right above him. He flinched and closed his eyes. He tried to peek one open, but without his glasses, it was even harder to see. Suddenly, a sharp, thin, ice cold object was rested on his bare chest, which made him shudder and shiver. A chuckle was heard right next to him. “Mr. Yutaka Watari...” the cold voice said, but with a bit of enthusiasm.
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Yeah, that's all I have so far. I need to add more to the prologue... but I haven't decided what yet. D:
I thank you if you take the time reading it <3 It would mean a lot to me, too, if you could reply. = D thanks a bunch! <3
