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Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 25, 2005 7:45pm
by Angel of Music
Here's another poem. Tell me how you like it.
Title: What Is Beauty?
What is beauty?
When one asks this,
People say 'tis only skin deep,
But that does not explain
What the question burning against my throat
Wishes to ask.
Is it what's on the outside, our looks?
Does it describe one's though of another's soul?
The inner self?
I don't understand
What people speak of
When they speak of beauty,
So my question to you,
My burning and baffling question is,
What is beauty?
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 25, 2005 9:16pm
by High Priest Seto
omg so nice hahhaha
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 25, 2005 9:18pm
by josh
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Posted: Apr 25, 2005 9:52pm
by blackrose_r7
Very funny.
Then tell me which are they?
I liked the poem though.
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 25, 2005 10:42pm
by Angel of Music
Here's another. Just wrote it.:
Title:True Love
What is 'true love'?
Is it when people exchange their vows on the alter?
I think it's something more.
Someone should love you for just being you
Your personality, your heart, your soul.
If someone only loves your looks,
Then what kind of love do you have?
If you got to know your lover, would you love them more?
If your lover got to know you, would the relationship be stronger?
Wouldn't that be a 'true love'?
So, what does someone mean
When they say 'true love'?
That, I believe, depends on what you're looking for.
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 26, 2005 12:31am
by tsubame_03
cool poems!

i like it! you're fond of poems with questions are you?

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Posted: Apr 26, 2005 3:42pm
by blackrose_r7
I liked this one also. Its got true meaning.(that it has a valuable lesson.
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 26, 2005 6:51pm
by Angel of Music
Thanks guys, and no, tsubame_03, I usually write poems pertaining to how I feel and at the time I wrote these, I was feeling very inqusitive.

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Posted: Apr 27, 2005 6:35pm
by Angel of Music
Here's one I wrote for my Language Arts class today. Try to guess what Im speaking of, since it's a metaphor poem.
It's a candle, flickering on and off
There is darkness in the house's corners
It is symbolized in many different ways
There is truth, and yet, no truth
There is a candle that has been blown out
And yet rekindled for someone else
Treat the rotting house with care,
For when the wind blows out YOUR candle,
The house shall no longer be there
What do you think?
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 27, 2005 7:58pm
by blackrose_r7
It was a little confusing but i think i get it.
I like it.
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 28, 2005 9:50am
by Angel of Music
It portryas how fragile friendship is, or at least it's supposed to. Im glad you like it! I just hope my Language Arts class will.
re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 28, 2005 3:48pm
by blackrose_r7
Im sure they will like it. If not they dont know true talent.

re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 28, 2005 6:34pm
by Angel of Music
Thanks. They did like it. My teacher wanted a copy of it. They just couldn't figure out what the poem was meaning. You know, about friendship and stuff.

re: Another poem!;)
Posted: Apr 30, 2005 10:38am
by lotrsandharrypotter
bravo!! good poems :D
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Posted: Apr 30, 2005 11:31pm
by Angel of Music
Thanks, lotrsandharrypotter and blackrose_r7. Im glad you like my poems!

re: Another poem!;)
Posted: May 01, 2005 6:48pm
by blackrose_r7
You're welcome.
Any time.