Absolute Anime

hope ya like it wat do ya think!!!!???

im bleeding and needing a hand of course no one is there to be of company.... ill just hang myself with these chains of misfortune, darkness that shrouds them, feeling of pain along with it......people around now trying to help me...........leave me alone!!!!!!!!! [censored] you all you all had your chance to help but now its too late i curse all of your souls to the dark abyss!!!!!!! teachers, parents, friend if thats what you want to call them dont understand a thing....they think that they know you but screw them they dont........im guessing i have my life to take........now with these chain of misfortune i wrap on my neck.......put the other end on the tree of sorrow..........what will they say when they think its ok to know me better till tommorrow.........hanging and sleeping forever in hell nevertheless i bleed in my head..........
my deep dark mind will not rest again..........
again and again......................

i like it ! its strong , deep , and powerful..
it expreses ur feelings in a true way without any sugar coating but saying it like it is . i lvu it ! i luv all ur poems !

thank darker angel i love your poems more though..............

I Likes ice cream and the poem aint to shabby either

thank ya!!!!!!!!!!!!

~smiles~ not bad at all

It was pretty darn good!!! I read your other and I liked that one too!! Keep writing!!

yes i have to agree with everyone else....it was very good

it was great!!!

thank ya all!!!!!!!!!
you all made my day........