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This was inspired by Phantom of the Opera:

Title:Deception

I hid in the shadows
I lied to her
Abusing her good faith
Pretending to be something I wasn't
I went past the point of no return
And tried to seduce her to follow
I brought her to a cold and dismal underground prison
I came to her in her dreams
Sang to her while she was sleeping
I betrayed her and she betrayed me in return

It's not that good, I know that. I tried to write it in a weird perspective.

Signed,
O.G.

i like it but you should make it like dr.sus phantom of the opra kind of thing to ad levady(jk) i like it
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The play’s the thing wherein I’ll catch the conscience of the king

hamlet

Thanks, phantom.

heres one i heard

Til the Day i die remember as the Wind blows by

That's really deep. Where did you hear it from?

really? Kenshin told me it

here is another one to ppl who cheats on there g/f(just saying)

Remember the girl u may her cry u will suffer til the day u die

Oh, I know that one. I've had too many of those experiences and those who have inflicted sorrow upon me never forgot it.

I really enjoyed it it was a nice change of pace from the poems that are great but only deepen my self-remorse

Why do you have self-remorse? Im glad you liked the poem, but Im sorry I made you feel bad about yourself more than you had already.