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my song

Posted: Jun 16, 2005 7:26pm
by vash the man-slayer
I watch how the
Moon sits in the sky
In the dark night
Shining with the light from the sun
The sun doesn't give life to the moon
Assuming the moon's gonna owe it one
It makes me think of how you act to me
You do favors and then rapidly
You just turn around and start asking me
About things you want back from me
I'm sick of the tension
Sick of the hunger
Sick of you acting like I owe you this
Find another place
To feed your greed
While I find a place to rest

I want to be in another place
I hate when you say you don't understand
You'll see it's not meant to be
I want to be in the energy, not with the enemy
A place for my head

Maybe someday I'll be just like you
And step on people like you do and
Run away the people I thought I knew
I remember back then who you were
You used to be calm
Used to be strong
Used to be generous
But you should've known
That you'd
Wear out your welcome
Now you see
How quiet it is
All alone
I'm so

re: my song

Posted: Jun 16, 2005 7:30pm
by Pyro Psycho
that was cool!!!!!!!
keep it up!!!!!!!!
good song are you in a band? :mrgreen:

re: my song

Posted: Jun 16, 2005 7:44pm
by Motoko Chan
I like it.

re: my song

Posted: Jun 16, 2005 7:47pm
by Smileycute_Kagome
woah...nice =D> =D> =D> ...kewl.....i luv it!

re: my song

Posted: Jun 17, 2005 9:28pm
by Bambi
That was soooo kewl. Keep it up =D> =D> =D> =D> \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/

re: my song

Posted: Jun 18, 2005 4:49pm
by Str1ke
Good Stuff. :shock:

re: my song

Posted: Jun 18, 2005 4:57pm
by Hatsuharu
Are you saying you WROTE the song? :x

re: my song

Posted: Jun 18, 2005 5:58pm
by vash the man-slayer
me and my friend
but a wrote mosh of the song he only added da last part

re: my song

Posted: Jun 18, 2005 6:02pm
by Motoko Chan
coolies.

re: my song

Posted: Jun 18, 2005 9:40pm
by Annaxubella
Great job, nice poem \:D/

re: my song

Posted: Jun 20, 2005 10:32am
by Little Bit
I like this song! *attempts to play the guitar part in the beginning*
I love Linkin Park! :love: Cheaster is such a great singer.

re: my song

Posted: Jul 10, 2005 12:05am
by RJD2
that's a linkin park song you didn't write kid. nice try though.

re: my song

Posted: Aug 05, 2005 11:36pm
by ♥DIVA♥
ohhhhhhhh busted. i was wondering when someone whould notice.