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The cross
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 1:49am
by shinobi88
http://www.adultswimmers.com/forums/sho ... php?t=3106
I'am finnshed with Chapter 3 of Episode II.
The Next Cahptet Chibi Usa is going to talk to Hotaru about the Kagewaki Legacy (Shikon Jewel). She's a spy at Omnicorp. While Kikiyo pays Setsuna and Rei a visit.
Kikiyo faint at Hikawa Shirne where Rei Find her. Since she is at another time she is aging 50 years but slowly. Chibi Usa falls for Kohaku. Conan faces Lead Crow.
So what do you think?
re: The cross
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 8:21am
by darkearthgoddess
Its alright I guess, and b/4 you publish this on the web, make sure you have the names spelled right, its Kikyo, not Kikiyo.
Re: re: The cross
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 10:08am
by shinobi88
darkearthgoddess wrote:Its alright I guess, and b/4 you publish this on the web, make sure you have the names spelled right, its Kikyo, not Kikiyo.
human error
re: The cross
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 10:15am
by Queen Serenity
Uh, shinobi-san, this is nothing against you or your stories, but you really ought to post these things in the "Fanfiction" forums. It just pushes back more contributing topics when you post these. Or, if you would prefer, make a thread called "Shinobi88's Fanfics" and post all your updates, questions and stuff there. If you haven't noticed, there are a lot of 2-reply threads that are about your fanfics. Just a suggestion.

Re: re: The cross
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 11:11am
by shinobi88
Queen Serenity wrote:Uh, shinobi-san, this is nothing against you or your stories, but you really ought to post these things in the "Fanfiction" forums. It just pushes back more contributing topics when you post these. Or, if you would prefer, make a thread called "Shinobi88's Fanfics" and post all your updates, questions and stuff there. If you haven't noticed, there are a lot of 2-reply threads that are about your fanfics. Just a suggestion.

Uh Sure why not....Serenity Hime
Re: re: The cross
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 11:53am
by shinobi88
The Units in my fanfic is The:
The Witches 5 Unit: Formerly worked In The Death Busters army. But after The Mugen High Incident. Each Witch was clone by the Crime Syndicate called the Black Organzation. They in Omnicorp
re: The cross
Posted: Jul 26, 2005 1:30pm
by Night Shade
Good, it reminds me of Metal Gear/Big o/ Batman/ Paycheck/ Splinter cell.
Is there othe Units in you Story?