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my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Nov 16, 2005 6:00am
by Gadget Alchemist
Love can pass through any obstacle, but…
Can love pass my obstacle in my life?
I think no...
He’s annoyed with me,
He has no interest in women
Because he doesn't have a heart...
He doesn't care about me
All he cares about is his revenge.
He loved no one except his parents and his sister
He's an assassin
He hates everyone who gets in his way
He feels no emotions.
Behind the smiles that I make in front of him,
He tries to ignore me,
It hurts inside
Behind these eyes that I glare in his dark eyes,
Are tears waiting to be shed.
At the end...
All the things that I've said about him...
I WAS wrong...
He loved me at the very end.
The man I loved…
Momochi Zabuza…

re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Nov 16, 2005 3:24pm
by Chibi1229
nice but this belongs in the talented area not here [-X

re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Nov 24, 2005 9:23pm
by Xehanort
Yes.This belongs in the Talent Area Zabuza's Girl08.

re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Nov 30, 2005 5:30pm
by Pyrokinetic Singer
Once I made that mistake.So embaresing...

re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Dec 02, 2005 2:07pm
by Xehanort
But yeah.Its a great poem.Keep the Zabuza poems coming.

Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Jun 21, 2006 3:39pm
by watermage
It's really nice, great job! It's sad though, you're good at this kind of stuff!

Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Jun 21, 2006 6:30pm
by Sasami Jurai
Nice poem! This can belong both in the Naruto and Talent Section Area, either way. ^^

Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Jun 22, 2006 9:06pm
by ANGEL OF HELL
^and acording to te girl above me, i was emo during my poem writing XD...WICH IM NOT!

good poem :)

Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Posted: Jun 23, 2006 2:08pm
by Sasami Jurai
ANGEL OF HELL wrote:^and acording to te girl above me, i was emo during my poem writing XD...WICH IM NOT!

good poem :)

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