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my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

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Gadget Alchemist
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my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

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Love can pass through any obstacle, but…
Can love pass my obstacle in my life?
I think no...
He’s annoyed with me,
He has no interest in women
Because he doesn't have a heart...
He doesn't care about me
All he cares about is his revenge.
He loved no one except his parents and his sister
He's an assassin
He hates everyone who gets in his way
He feels no emotions.
Behind the smiles that I make in front of him,
He tries to ignore me,
It hurts inside
Behind these eyes that I glare in his dark eyes,
Are tears waiting to be shed.
At the end...
All the things that I've said about him...
I WAS wrong...
He loved me at the very end.
The man I loved…
Momochi Zabuza…
I love Greed-sama!

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re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Post by Chibi1229 »

nice but this belongs in the talented area not here [-X
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re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Post by Xehanort »

Yes.This belongs in the Talent Area Zabuza's Girl08.
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Once I made that mistake.So embaresing...
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Post by Xehanort »

But yeah.Its a great poem.Keep the Zabuza poems coming.
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Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Post by watermage »

It's really nice, great job! It's sad though, you're good at this kind of stuff!
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Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Post by Sasami Jurai »

Nice poem! This can belong both in the Naruto and Talent Section Area, either way. ^^
Don't wake me; I plan on sleeping in
There is a light that never goes out~
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Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

Post by ANGEL OF HELL »

^and acording to te girl above me, i was emo during my poem writing XD...WICH IM NOT!

good poem :)
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Re: my second poem about Zabuza!!!!

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ANGEL OF HELL wrote:^and acording to te girl above me, i was emo during my poem writing XD...WICH IM NOT!

good poem :)

Huh?
Don't wake me; I plan on sleeping in
There is a light that never goes out~
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