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Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 04, 2006 8:39am
by I Am Kira!
Ok, ive been writing alot of poems lately and i have a whole notepad of them. so here is one.

IM NOT OK

Everyday I try to seem,
As if Im fine,
As if Im happy.
But the sad truth is Im bleeding inside,
And Im trying to hide,
The pain I feel deep down,
And once, Twice, Three times,
Ive tried to drown,
But my sorrows keep coming back,
Saving me from going down,
Just so they can torture me,
And make me live my life,
Going on in pain,
Putting on an act,
Until the day,
I go insane.
But to be honest,
Its all an show,
And no matter what u do or say,
My troubles will not fade away,
Theres no one who can help me,
IM NOT OK.

In loving memory of my GreatGrandfather. I love u Poppop

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 04, 2006 9:02am
by §åmüriã_Wårriør
nice poem that is how i feel.... except i keep the feelings inside, and dont let the one know i am hurting, muhahaha!

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 04, 2006 12:25pm
by Dersin
Thats a good poem man, I like it, I envy u. =D>

Re: re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 05, 2006 7:05am
by I Am Kira!
§åmüriã_Wårriør wrote:nice poem that is how i feel.... except i keep the feelings inside, and dont let the one know i am hurting, muhahaha!
Thats wat this poem is about, how im hiding my feeling from every1

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 05, 2006 7:06am
by I Am Kira!
And since # 2 got the 100% of the vote, i guess ill post it. read my next 1 if u want to.

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 06, 2006 6:11am
by Biki
it's kind of ridiculous how much i relate 2 this poem franky. im hurting now bcuz i no ur hurting. my shoulder is ur's 2 cry on.

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 09, 2006 8:34am
by I Am Kira!
Thx. but 1 thing. DONT CALL ME FRANKY!!! it makes me feel like a little kid. and u didnt even spell it right. it would be spelled FrankIE not FrankY.

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 09, 2006 12:53pm
by Biki
that was kind of the purpose dear. j/k. nd i will spell it how i wish thank u very much.

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 10, 2006 5:06am
by I Am Kira!
](*,) its like talking to my walls. they dont listen *Sigh*

But i r my master so it doesnt matter

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 11, 2006 2:02pm
by Biki
i dont respond very well 2 commands. im not a dog, but ill stop if it annoys u franky. :lol:

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 12, 2006 7:12am
by I Am Kira!
:roll: sure u will.

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 12, 2006 12:41pm
by Biki
no really i will.

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Jan 17, 2006 7:09am
by I Am Kira!
im gonna hold u to that.

re: Im Not Ok

Posted: Feb 10, 2006 2:57pm
by Biki
ok u can franky. lol. ok last time last time. :lol: ya no i love ya frank. c i can stop.