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I Am Kira!
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Im Not Ok

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Ok, ive been writing alot of poems lately and i have a whole notepad of them. so here is one.

IM NOT OK

Everyday I try to seem,
As if Im fine,
As if Im happy.
But the sad truth is Im bleeding inside,
And Im trying to hide,
The pain I feel deep down,
And once, Twice, Three times,
Ive tried to drown,
But my sorrows keep coming back,
Saving me from going down,
Just so they can torture me,
And make me live my life,
Going on in pain,
Putting on an act,
Until the day,
I go insane.
But to be honest,
Its all an show,
And no matter what u do or say,
My troubles will not fade away,
Theres no one who can help me,
IM NOT OK.

In loving memory of my GreatGrandfather. I love u Poppop
I will create an ideal world, where only those i deem worthy will live in peace. I will eliminate all the evil humans in this ruined world. if not me, then who else?
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Post by §åmüriã_Wårriør »

nice poem that is how i feel.... except i keep the feelings inside, and dont let the one know i am hurting, muhahaha!
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Thats a good poem man, I like it, I envy u. =D>
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§åmüriã_Wårriør wrote:nice poem that is how i feel.... except i keep the feelings inside, and dont let the one know i am hurting, muhahaha!
Thats wat this poem is about, how im hiding my feeling from every1
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And since # 2 got the 100% of the vote, i guess ill post it. read my next 1 if u want to.
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it's kind of ridiculous how much i relate 2 this poem franky. im hurting now bcuz i no ur hurting. my shoulder is ur's 2 cry on.
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Thx. but 1 thing. DONT CALL ME FRANKY!!! it makes me feel like a little kid. and u didnt even spell it right. it would be spelled FrankIE not FrankY.
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that was kind of the purpose dear. j/k. nd i will spell it how i wish thank u very much.
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](*,) its like talking to my walls. they dont listen *Sigh*

But i r my master so it doesnt matter
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i dont respond very well 2 commands. im not a dog, but ill stop if it annoys u franky. :lol:
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:roll: sure u will.
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no really i will.
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im gonna hold u to that.
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ok u can franky. lol. ok last time last time. :lol: ya no i love ya frank. c i can stop.
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