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Heaven

Posted: Jul 18, 2006 12:51pm
by Dersin
Depression and pain all feels the to me.
Is there no where else which my soul can feel free.
Heaven is where I want to be.

A place where I can close my eyes.
A land so peaceful I CAN ease my mind.
A world where love never seace.
Heaven is where I want to be.

Depression, heartacke, and pain, will never be the case,
not even our race will ever protrude into this glorious place.
And hell will never be seen.
Heaven is a place you would love to be.

Re: Heaven

Posted: Jul 18, 2006 1:59pm
by KoYue
Aw, I liked it. Kinda sad, but pretty good overall. =D>

Re: Heaven

Posted: Jul 29, 2006 5:35pm
by Youko Kurama007
Really good I like it :)

Re: Heaven

Posted: Jul 30, 2006 4:27pm
by Biki
its beautiful luv.