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Heaven

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Dersin
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Heaven

Post by Dersin »

Depression and pain all feels the to me.
Is there no where else which my soul can feel free.
Heaven is where I want to be.

A place where I can close my eyes.
A land so peaceful I CAN ease my mind.
A world where love never seace.
Heaven is where I want to be.

Depression, heartacke, and pain, will never be the case,
not even our race will ever protrude into this glorious place.
And hell will never be seen.
Heaven is a place you would love to be.
Love is precious.
KoYue
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Re: Heaven

Post by KoYue »

Aw, I liked it. Kinda sad, but pretty good overall. =D>
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Re: Heaven

Post by Youko Kurama007 »

Really good I like it :)
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Biki
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Re: Heaven

Post by Biki »

its beautiful luv.
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