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One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 05, 2007 11:19am
by Lashun
This is just a poem i wrote one day. Hope u like it.

I watch you sit there
calm and content
But I know that you know something
I don't want you to

It's silly to let it bug me
But it is
I know it's not true
But it is

A crazy rumor
A stupid lie
I try to stress it to you
You say I'm in denial

I can't leave it alone
Is it true?
I'm unsure
But I'm sticking to my story

It's funny though
Everytime you pass me
I sigh heavily to get rid of my anxiety

Maybe I should face this so called truth
Just admit my so called desire
This so called real feeling
This so called.......puppy love

I like you?
No--that doesnt feel right..
I love you?
No--I feel even worse..

Such confusion
Can my heart make up its mind?
Or can my mind listen to its heart?
Will I move on not knowing..

How am I supposed to feel...
In a crush...?

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 05, 2007 11:22am
by SpurKz
:-k I like it. :)

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 05, 2007 11:26am
by Cold Revolver
Nice, the first bit could use more work but the rest of it realy has alot of feeling. Fantastic.

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 05, 2007 12:00pm
by Lashun
Thanx for being honest :)

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 05, 2007 12:14pm
by Cold Revolver
Anytime, From the way your going I think you will make a great poet someday, if not in a few months. :P

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 05, 2007 12:51pm
by Lashun
:mrgreen: thanx

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 05, 2007 12:55pm
by Cold Revolver
Lashun wrote::mrgreen: thanx
:D

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 09, 2007 5:46pm
by Kuragari
You're a really good poet.. I would like to see more poems from you! ^___^

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 12, 2007 3:54pm
by Biki
i like it. good luck with that crush thing. o.o

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 20, 2007 2:30pm
by Sesshomaru-sama
it was a good poem, there is a lot of heart in every word...

like biki said good luck with your crush ^_^

Re: One of my original poems

Posted: Apr 21, 2007 5:31pm
by Lashun
o.O gah!! um....thanx...