One of my original poems

[Lashun]

This is just a poem i wrote one day. Hope u like it.

I watch you sit there
calm and content
But I know that you know something
I don't want you to

It's silly to let it bug me
But it is
I know it's not true
But it is

A crazy rumor
A stupid lie
I try to stress it to you
You say I'm in denial

I can't leave it alone
Is it true?
I'm unsure
But I'm sticking to my story

It's funny though
Everytime you pass me
I sigh heavily to get rid of my anxiety

Maybe I should face this so called truth
Just admit my so called desire
This so called real feeling
This so called.......puppy love

I like you?
No--that doesnt feel right..
I love you?
No--I feel even worse..

Such confusion
Can my heart make up its mind?
Or can my mind listen to its heart?
Will I move on not knowing..

How am I supposed to feel...
In a crush...?

[SpurKz]

I like it.

[Cold Revolver]

Nice, the first bit could use more work but the rest of it realy has alot of feeling. Fantastic.

[Lashun]

Thanx for being honest

[Cold Revolver]

Anytime, From the way your going I think you will make a great poet someday, if not in a few months.

[Lashun]

thanx

[Cold Revolver]

thanx

[Kuragari]

You're a really good poet.. I would like to see more poems from you! ^___^

[Biki]

i like it. good luck with that crush thing. o.o

[Sesshomaru-sama]

it was a good poem, there is a lot of heart in every word...

like biki said good luck with your crush ^_^

[Lashun]

o.O gah!! um....thanx...