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Walking the dangerous streets at night
Scumbags roam looking for fights
If I wasn't Jesus I'd get a fright
But I know I'll be alright

sorry for trying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SORRY!!!!!

No, it is ok, a poem is a poem, don't matter what shape and size it's still good. people may say stuff like 'Oh, thats a load of [censored].' but you tryed. or they may say 'that is good, i liked it.'.

it was interesting.Good job.

What I saw While reading your poem is.... people[scumbags] roaming around dark streets, allys, staying in the shadows waiting for the next victim. And then Jesus started walking down that dangerous ally... and it just looked odd cause Jesus wearing the clothes he is normally portrayed in looked odd with the surrounding of modern day.... but it has a good meaning and reminds me of that one story that is usually passed around on myspace.

ALL IN ALL: Good Job!

Hail the saviour!

Thanks guys I love you

When I read the topic title, I had to click

Good job Jesus

thanks

i oughta slap you out for blasphemy but im way too lazy

Crazy talk wrote:i oughta slap you out for blasphemy but im way too lazy

plus u have a secret thing for me

Jesus Christ wrote:

Crazy talk wrote:i oughta slap you out for blasphemy but im way too lazy

plus u have a secret thing for me

:O who told you about my fetish for fags?????

I hate you.

its what i do best

Ok guys break it up.....