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josh :)
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Poem about Scumbags

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Walking the dangerous streets at night
Scumbags roam looking for fights
If I wasn't Jesus I'd get a fright
But I know I'll be alright
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Re: Poem about Scumbags

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sorry for trying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SORRY!!!!!
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No, it is ok, a poem is a poem, don't matter what shape and size it's still good. people may say stuff like 'Oh, thats a load of [censored].' but you tryed. or they may say 'that is good, i liked it.'.
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it was interesting.Good job.
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Re: Poem about Scumbags

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What I saw While reading your poem is.... people[scumbags] roaming around dark streets, allys, staying in the shadows waiting for the next victim. And then Jesus started walking down that dangerous ally... and it just looked odd cause Jesus wearing the clothes he is normally portrayed in looked odd with the surrounding of modern day.... but it has a good meaning and reminds me of that one story that is usually passed around on myspace.

ALL IN ALL: Good Job!
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Hail the saviour!
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Thanks guys :) I love you
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When I read the topic title, I had to click 8)
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Good job Jesus
i told yuo about stares dog
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thanks :)
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Re: Poem about Scumbags

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i oughta slap you out for blasphemy but im way too lazy
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Crazy talk wrote:i oughta slap you out for blasphemy but im way too lazy
plus u have a secret thing for me :)
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Re: Poem about Scumbags

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Jesus Christ wrote:
Crazy talk wrote:i oughta slap you out for blasphemy but im way too lazy
plus u have a secret thing for me :)
:O who told you about my fetish for fags?????
Life is short, break the rules, 4give quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably and never regret anythin that made you smile :) and may u know God in a special way this year
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I hate you.
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Re: Poem about Scumbags

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its what i do best 8)
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Re: Poem about Scumbags

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Ok guys break it up.....
i told yuo about stares dog
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