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Go-nin no Kumori ^.^

Posted: May 15, 2008 6:55am
by midnightXequilibrium
uh... hi! I'm midnightXequilibrium (new to the forum but that doesn't matter) I have been writing a manga and have my rough copies on deviant. I still need to ink it and do alot of photo shop work, but I think the story line is ok. I was just wonder if anyone would check it out and and give me some feedback (Note, it gets better as it goes along.) It is an action with occasional romance... uh... ya. (its romance yuri just to forewarn.) other than that, just please check it out and drop me a line. http://midnightxequilibrium.deviantart. ... y/#_browse

Re: Go-nin no Kumori ^.^

Posted: May 15, 2008 6:39pm
by Gaming Goddess
Well done, my dear.

You and your cliches

Re: Go-nin no Kumori ^.^

Posted: May 16, 2008 12:28am
by divinephoenix
Kinda good...But I think it needs more work though..Sorry, I'm not quite impressed by your work.I've seen better (my best friend makes really good comics ) but you have talent. Work a bit on your shading and proportions and how the panels work.