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Go-nin no Kumori ^.^
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midnightXequilibrium
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Go-nin no Kumori ^.^
uh... hi! I'm midnightXequilibrium (new to the forum but that doesn't matter) I have been writing a manga and have my rough copies on deviant. I still need to ink it and do alot of photo shop work, but I think the story line is ok. I was just wonder if anyone would check it out and and give me some feedback (Note, it gets better as it goes along.) It is an action with occasional romance... uh... ya. (its romance yuri just to forewarn.) other than that, just please check it out and drop me a line. http://midnightxequilibrium.deviantart. ... y/#_browse
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Gaming Goddess
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Re: Go-nin no Kumori ^.^
Well done, my dear.
You and your cliches
You and your cliches
An ordinary girl, an ordinary waist; but ordinary's just not good enough today.
Who needs imagination when you have a television?
Half of the Dream Team. Sup Mike?
Part of the Sexy Trio 
BIKI! =3
Who needs imagination when you have a television?
Half of the Dream Team. Sup Mike?
Part of the Sexy Trio BIKI! =3
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divinephoenix
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Re: Go-nin no Kumori ^.^
Kinda good...But I think it needs more work though..Sorry, I'm not quite impressed by your work.I've seen better (my best friend makes really good comics ) but you have talent. Work a bit on your shading and proportions and how the panels work.