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I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 16, 2008 4:53pm
by Biki
I thought I had finally moved on
After losing you
I had met another
Loved another
Lost another
My heart had healed
And broken
And healed
All over again
And I thought I was over you
And yet lately
I find myself thinking of you again
And though it makes me happy
I can't help but be sad
At the same time
It makes me wonder
If you've moved on too
But even if you have
If you sometimes
Still think of me too
Then I laugh at myself
Because I thought was over you
Even so I go back
And look at the messages you sent me
And even after all this time
I smile like I did back then
And my heart thumps
And my eyes fill
With the most beautiful tears I've ever cried
And then I laugh at myself
Because I thought I was over you
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 16, 2008 7:14pm
by Yami Haga-Ryuzaki
...love it. ._. absolutely love it. ♥
you're really good with words Biki'. x3
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 18, 2008 5:51am
by Hardcore
..Amazing.
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 18, 2008 10:39am
by Amray
That was awesome. But she should just get over that moron she's talking about, he must have done something scummish for her to leave him, I mean she just sounds so nice, and also writes good poems. ^_^
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 19, 2008 10:03am
by Mz'Cherry
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 28, 2008 8:37pm
by Biki
thanx yami, pimp, amray, and cherry. :] but amray, dude, you were supposed to be like my little brother. now you talk like you never knew me. :[ but thanx again all. >]
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 29, 2008 2:17am
by miki_animeholix
well, i was not even over him...
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 29, 2008 2:10pm
by Biki
.............................................what? o.o you never knew him. >.> i don't think. O.O
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 29, 2008 6:25pm
by Gaming Goddess
Damnit Biki! You always get me =[
Beautiful, baby, beautifully written.
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 30, 2008 5:54pm
by Biki
thanx GG lover. >]
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 31, 2008 6:46am
by scorpionwarrior
Very good. I felt that the words were repetitive but I read it over about 10 times (lol) and I see it now. Great =3
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: May 31, 2008 7:59pm
by Biki
well one line was supposed to be repetitive: "....i thought i was over you" gotta emphasize that point ya know?
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: Jun 04, 2008 3:36am
by Nyx
Oooooooooooh....Biki-bunz, where have you been? I miss your poems.
You made me go ;.; cuz I can relate.
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: Jun 04, 2008 10:09am
by Biki
i left the site sis. XD! does no one read the "i am leaving/returning thread"? iv been popping up lately 1 bcuz AAers on msn told me to and 2 bcuz i wanted to see what ppl thought of this poem. >.>
but thanx sis. :] im sure a lot of people can relate. XD! stupid boys. :p
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: Jun 08, 2008 6:21pm
by Nyx
Biki wrote:i left the site sis. XD! does no one read the "i am leaving/returning thread"? iv been popping up lately 1 bcuz AAers on msn told me to and 2 bcuz i wanted to see what ppl thought of this poem. >.>
but thanx sis. :] im sure a lot of people can relate. XD! stupid boys. :p
I only really hang out in my Army's thread nowadays. XD
No, stupid exes and stupid, teasing Cloud. DX
Re: I Thought I Was Over You
Posted: Jun 11, 2008 7:25am
by animaniac
I love it baby biki!!!! and I love youuuuuuuuuu! forever and ever!
