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I Thought I Was Over You

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I Thought I Was Over You

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I thought I had finally moved on
After losing you
I had met another
Loved another
Lost another
My heart had healed
And broken
And healed
All over again
And I thought I was over you
And yet lately
I find myself thinking of you again
And though it makes me happy
I can't help but be sad
At the same time
It makes me wonder
If you've moved on too
But even if you have
If you sometimes
Still think of me too
Then I laugh at myself
Because I thought was over you
Even so I go back
And look at the messages you sent me
And even after all this time
I smile like I did back then
And my heart thumps
And my eyes fill
With the most beautiful tears I've ever cried
And then I laugh at myself
Because I thought I was over you
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Re: I Thought I Was Over You

Post by Yami Haga-Ryuzaki »

...love it. ._. absolutely love it. ♥

you're really good with words Biki'. x3
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Re: I Thought I Was Over You

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..Amazing.
Decisions to decisions are made and not bought, but I thought this wouldn't hurt a lot. I guess not.
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That was awesome. But she should just get over that moron she's talking about, he must have done something scummish for her to leave him, I mean she just sounds so nice, and also writes good poems. ^_^
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Re: I Thought I Was Over You

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OMG......... that was beautiful i can totally relate to that......... thats just plain breath taking. :cry: =D> =D>
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thanx yami, pimp, amray, and cherry. :] but amray, dude, you were supposed to be like my little brother. now you talk like you never knew me. :[ but thanx again all. >]
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Re: I Thought I Was Over You

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well, i was not even over him...
um.... can i say... vampires in the hat around????
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.............................................what? o.o you never knew him. >.> i don't think. O.O
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Damnit Biki! You always get me =[

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thanx GG lover. >]
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Very good. I felt that the words were repetitive but I read it over about 10 times (lol) and I see it now. Great =3
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well one line was supposed to be repetitive: "....i thought i was over you" gotta emphasize that point ya know? :D
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Oooooooooooh....Biki-bunz, where have you been? I miss your poems.

You made me go ;.; cuz I can relate.
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i left the site sis. XD! does no one read the "i am leaving/returning thread"? iv been popping up lately 1 bcuz AAers on msn told me to and 2 bcuz i wanted to see what ppl thought of this poem. >.>

but thanx sis. :] im sure a lot of people can relate. XD! stupid boys. :p
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Biki wrote:i left the site sis. XD! does no one read the "i am leaving/returning thread"? iv been popping up lately 1 bcuz AAers on msn told me to and 2 bcuz i wanted to see what ppl thought of this poem. >.>

but thanx sis. :] im sure a lot of people can relate. XD! stupid boys. :p
I only really hang out in my Army's thread nowadays. XD

No, stupid exes and stupid, teasing Cloud. DX
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I love it baby biki!!!! and I love youuuuuuuuuu! forever and ever! :mrgreen:
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