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Chains of Fates (poem)

Posted: Jun 05, 2008 1:33pm
by Byakuya-sama
Countless intertwining paths; leading to your destruction,
Or leaving you to your many desires.
Paths that can no longer be taken or set on fire.
Standing helplessly waiting for a path's instruction,
But also finding another one's construction.
This one changes your status higher,
That one seduces you into a liar.
Only one will get your introduction.
Once the path is chosen; no time to slack,
Step off and feel God's mighty wrath.
Walking blindly into the black
Like bats in the rain; no way to keep track.
Until you meet a wall that ends your path,
There is no longer turning back.

Re: Chains of Fates (poem)

Posted: Jun 05, 2008 4:45pm
by scorpionwarrior
Very well done :)

Re: Chains of Fates (poem)

Posted: Jun 06, 2008 5:18pm
by LiquidMist
squeak squeak, that was a good poem.
:( but why must it be a destructive path...
i want flowery path and it has to be shiny and sparkly :D
Hmm...fire...path....*pyro*

~i have came, i read, i post~

Re: Chains of Fates (poem)

Posted: Jun 06, 2008 7:39pm
by Biki
aww tachi that was great. ^-^ good job little brother. :]