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Chains of Fates (poem)

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Byakuya-sama
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Chains of Fates (poem)

Post by Byakuya-sama »

Countless intertwining paths; leading to your destruction,
Or leaving you to your many desires.
Paths that can no longer be taken or set on fire.
Standing helplessly waiting for a path's instruction,
But also finding another one's construction.
This one changes your status higher,
That one seduces you into a liar.
Only one will get your introduction.
Once the path is chosen; no time to slack,
Step off and feel God's mighty wrath.
Walking blindly into the black
Like bats in the rain; no way to keep track.
Until you meet a wall that ends your path,
There is no longer turning back.
Conquering others is strength, Conquering yourself is true power.
Quitters never win, but losers don't win either.
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Re: Chains of Fates (poem)

Post by scorpionwarrior »

Very well done :)
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LiquidMist
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Re: Chains of Fates (poem)

Post by LiquidMist »

squeak squeak, that was a good poem.
:( but why must it be a destructive path...
i want flowery path and it has to be shiny and sparkly :D
Hmm...fire...path....*pyro*

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Re: Chains of Fates (poem)

Post by Biki »

aww tachi that was great. ^-^ good job little brother. :]
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