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Poetry by Jesus Christ
Posted: Sep 03, 2008 5:32am
by josh :)
She sits there in the aisle
I want to make her smile
But I'm scared she might be bile
So I hide like a reptile...
when its raining.
I hide for awhile
Sitting on cold tiles
Feeling as if in exile
I play snake on my mobile..
phone.
thanks i've been working on this one for about 4 months
Re: Poetry by Jesus Christ
Posted: Sep 04, 2008 9:15pm
by Biki
i like the way you found so many freaking words to rhyme with aisle. XD!
you shoulda went to talk to her! D:
you should have thrown vile in there somewhere too. >.> or pile! =D! ......yeah, pile. <3
Re: Poetry by Jesus Christ
Posted: Sep 05, 2008 9:57am
by josh :)
yes. im sure if i could b bothered i could compile a mile of words rhyming in that same style but if i do im sure i'll go insane and senile so i might just stop here with my freestyle.
Re: Poetry by Jesus Christ
Posted: Sep 06, 2008 9:56am
by Hardcore
You're cool. xDD
Re: Poetry by Jesus Christ
Posted: Sep 06, 2008 10:03am
by josh :)
not really
Re: Poetry by Jesus Christ
Posted: Sep 06, 2008 10:04am
by Biki
Jesus Christ wrote:yes. im sure if i could b bothered i could compile a mile of words rhyming in that same style but if i do im sure i'll go insane and senile so i might just stop here with my freestyle.
your use of "pile" right here was awesome.
